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11/9/2003 c1 2NiteSkyStar
I love this! Very powerful and very moving. This is strong stuff. Keep up the awesome work! You're a fantastic writer.

-:*NiteSkyStar*:-
10/28/2003 c1 9januaryisforever
Woww... ::applause:: You've been listening to Imaginary, haven't you? :B Good CD, eh? Spiffy poem. It's not in standard form, which makes it UBER-cool. ;) I love the little words you popped in at the end. They add a nice effect. Keep writing - hope you get better soon!

::cowers from purple chainsaw-elephants::
10/27/2003 c1 13evm
Whee! Fun! I love! I like your new style, so inventive! You should name it( the style)! Finally you've writen a poem with your own muse and not andrea's stolen one! This poem sound more like what you usally write. I like!
10/27/2003 c1 2Saranha de Angelo
Honesty time...somehow to me the purple elephants didn't seem to fit with the seriousness of the story, but if that's what you were thinking when you wrote it, what do I know? I can't write poetry! Wee! Anyway, I like it, and I like how you insert sets of one word lines...it draws your attention. Coolioifigo...
10/27/2003 c1 pieces
Truly inspired, and slightly humorous. You have an amazing talent.

~Gabby

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