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9/8/2004 c1 4kemushi caterpillar
wow, lily-chan, i always kinda figured you were crazy anyway... although i mean the good kind, not the pyschotic kind...
10/28/2003 c1 30Roadside Dryer
Good poem makes me think (scary thought thinking! On a school night with no homework!)
10/28/2003 c1 activist59
wow. that is really good. so fin is real? Your not going insane. At least I think your not. towards the end of our walk home you seemed fine but when we were by the school you seemed truly insane. But I don't mind! This is a reall good poem though.

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10/28/2003 c1 220Namir Swiftpaw
Expressing emotions makes you insane? Jeez, I must have been insane all of my life, then.

You NEED to express yourself. No wonder you feel insane, if you keep everything inside you all the time. It's not called insanity - it's called bottling up your emotions. It's not healthy.

You've got some minor spelling errors in here...and it's not exactly the best poem, but you expressed yourself and that is good. =)

Keep writing.

~Namir Swiftpaw
10/28/2003 c1 53Punky Monkey
lol...why the hell did u pretend u were insane? Anyway good poem the short lines add to the drama. Keep writing :)

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