11/23/2003 c1 11donzilla70
Wow!
Such intense and complete imagery with so few words.
Good work...
Keep writing
Wow!
Such intense and complete imagery with so few words.
Good work...
Keep writing
10/29/2003 c1 35rocket baby doll
me likes... a tinge morbid, i must admit, but a god tinge... i like the imagry though, its nice...well not nice in the normal sense, but nice as in well done... yeah, you know what im trying to say...
Keep it up!
me likes... a tinge morbid, i must admit, but a god tinge... i like the imagry though, its nice...well not nice in the normal sense, but nice as in well done... yeah, you know what im trying to say...
Keep it up!
10/29/2003 c1 30Roadside Dryer
This is really sad. With the kind of lit teacher I have I would never share this, (she smiles and is too happy for her own good!)
This is really sad. With the kind of lit teacher I have I would never share this, (she smiles and is too happy for her own good!)