10/30/2003 c1 28Diana Shore
Amazing. Beautifully expressed. I know beautiful may not be the best word to describe such a dark and brooding poem, but it's the first one that popped into my head.

10/30/2003 c1 21Miamouse
Good opening and ending, both strong and appropriate.

Some of the phrases could be a little more original, but that's just experimental stuff. Keep it up, enjoyed.

Mia