6/30/2007 c3 8Black Viper
Well. Great story! I may not agree to things that happen here but as long as it's just a story I can read it and love it without feeling guilty right?
/S
Well. Great story! I may not agree to things that happen here but as long as it's just a story I can read it and love it without feeling guilty right?
/S
1/3/2005 c3 5Jahar
Hey! I'm reviewing, so you gotta continue! That was amazing! Some spelling errors here and there, but otherwise it was great. I like how Devin's not afraid to speak her mind. What time period is this?
Hey! I'm reviewing, so you gotta continue! That was amazing! Some spelling errors here and there, but otherwise it was great. I like how Devin's not afraid to speak her mind. What time period is this?
11/17/2003 c3 12Little Mermaid
that sounds like a fun situation. too bad it was only a thunder storm. hm...but then again what else could it have been?
update asap
that sounds like a fun situation. too bad it was only a thunder storm. hm...but then again what else could it have been?
update asap
11/14/2003 c3 1sudden0outburst
Great story. Love the fact that she had to get into bed with him because she was scared of the storm. A bit stereotypical since I'm a girl and actually enjoy a nice storm but hey. It's your story and a well written one at that...
Great story. Love the fact that she had to get into bed with him because she was scared of the storm. A bit stereotypical since I'm a girl and actually enjoy a nice storm but hey. It's your story and a well written one at that...
11/12/2003 c3 kgcyglu
I liked the chappie. I hope he isn't to mean to her. Can't wait 'til the next chappie. Update soon. Thanks.
I liked the chappie. I hope he isn't to mean to her. Can't wait 'til the next chappie. Update soon. Thanks.
11/12/2003 c3 9Winter Fae
I absoltley love this story its so passonate but not so much so that it is stifling. Update soon or I will go crazy hehe. Keep up the good work, also lovely style of writing.
I absoltley love this story its so passonate but not so much so that it is stifling. Update soon or I will go crazy hehe. Keep up the good work, also lovely style of writing.
11/11/2003 c2 3Kisa Sohma
oh. ur evil cause u left it at a cliff hanger! oh well.hey great chapter. till next time!
oh. ur evil cause u left it at a cliff hanger! oh well.hey great chapter. till next time!
11/11/2003 c2 12Little Mermaid
that's okay. you're updating a LOT faster than the rest of us...i havent updated in a month i think...o well.
devin's so much better than that. i thought thomas was getting better at the beginning. how misleading! so is he just like that in public? or is that the way he really feels? or will feel just he doesn't know it?
update asap
that's okay. you're updating a LOT faster than the rest of us...i havent updated in a month i think...o well.
devin's so much better than that. i thought thomas was getting better at the beginning. how misleading! so is he just like that in public? or is that the way he really feels? or will feel just he doesn't know it?
update asap