12/25/2003 c1 Eleena Thea
Very cool (for lack of a more intellectual sounding word). The only word that didn't really work was when you said pot. It was a "cute" statement but it doesn't really fit with the rest of your word choice. I read in your bio that your inspiration was Poe. If you know Poe, you'll know that he uses an elevated vocabulary. Elevation is good in my books. You have that "elevation". Pot is not elevated.

11/2/2003 c1 87me10
wow *blinks* this was brilliant, your decriptions were amazing and so vivid! And your flow of words and rhyming were truely...remarkable...i really cant see a way of improving this.

problem is..these descriptions dont seem to be about the dreams i have, they relate more to my reality!

10/31/2003 c1 47Anjeni Windsinger
Great write! Your flow was really good, and you did a nice job on the rhyming.

Keep writing.

10/31/2003 c1 15BecomingMyself
This strangeness makes you write very well, though might be odd, it is recognized by a lot of us, I think...

So dream on, and write some more!

I think you are good at it...