11/22/2003 c1 Lillith
Not sad, but great. I love what it's saying.
Not sad, but great. I love what it's saying.
11/10/2003 c1 4NirvanaRawkz
Hey, me again. Anyway, Wow... let me just say you officially have a fan. I love this, as much as I loved the Titanic ones.
I have a couple poems on here too... not as good of course. Maybe you can give me some pointers?
~Jenna
Hey, me again. Anyway, Wow... let me just say you officially have a fan. I love this, as much as I loved the Titanic ones.
I have a couple poems on here too... not as good of course. Maybe you can give me some pointers?
~Jenna
11/4/2003 c1 lolly pop3
Cool! This is a nice happy kinda poem! Keep writing!
Cool! This is a nice happy kinda poem! Keep writing!
11/2/2003 c1 Hindi Sad Diamonds
This is absolutely gorgeous. It flows really, really well, and the words are very powerful, and sweet. I especially like the final stanza. This is wonderful, dearie. Do post more of your work! Great job. :-)
~ Cinna
This is absolutely gorgeous. It flows really, really well, and the words are very powerful, and sweet. I especially like the final stanza. This is wonderful, dearie. Do post more of your work! Great job. :-)
~ Cinna
11/2/2003 c1 114Wren Craven
Good job, except you wrote 'I did not waist' and i think you meant 'i did not waste' but i really liked that...I've only seen 15 of those things, and i really enjoyed your piece of work...keep it up, i really like reading it!
chloe carpenter
p.s. please read and review my stuff if you get the chance
Good job, except you wrote 'I did not waist' and i think you meant 'i did not waste' but i really liked that...I've only seen 15 of those things, and i really enjoyed your piece of work...keep it up, i really like reading it!
chloe carpenter
p.s. please read and review my stuff if you get the chance