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3/4/2005 c1 8the heart's pawn-shop
'a bittersweet but tender dream' indeed! that was really well done. i love your descriptions and the way you tell a story through this little amount of text. excellent job! keep it up.-the heart's pawn-shop
11/4/2003 c1 Wendy
mm...wow... very meaningful... i m kinda.. speechless lol, yeah, g2g now, cya
11/3/2003 c1 21Crystal Snowflakes
Ah, great job =) I would say you're writing better than I am ! =)
11/3/2003 c1 itk with a dark side
This is a great story/dream it was a breath of fresh air as i was suppose to be in history class. Good keep writting and i'll keep reading.
11/2/2003 c1 Tony
Wow... what can I say besides wow... like you said, bitter sweet, yet tender... love your work. Just brilliant!
11/2/2003 c1 foreverblues
It's so beautiful, tender, sweet and yet bitter. You have talent, you do, but how does he know that she doesn't have feelings for him. How does he know that she only pity him? Why so sad?
11/2/2003 c1 Derek
Nice work... so tender... so touching... hehe. The beach is nice, but it's c-o-l-d... shilvers...

nice job!

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