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11/15/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
You explained the roles so well and made them symbolic. Great work.

~Heart of the Sword
11/3/2003 c1 99Myra Kilgore
Hey trinity...you know I'm always here to lend an ear, a hand, a liver, or any other body part or organ you may need...keep up the writing...great work...read it at the coffee house..please?-KS
11/3/2003 c1 12IHJ
A good poem, with nice metaphorical parallels between life and us... (*not sure if I'm making sense*) Like the comparisons between the coach and referee.

Good job. *thumbs up*

Izzy J.

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