for Styx11/23/2003 c1 
16AellaLives
Hey Lard Nar! Well, i must say that i do like it...but it'd be even nicer if it was longer ^.^ I can see that the story should be pretty interesting. I want to read the rest so update, update, update! ^.^
16AellaLivesHey Lard Nar! Well, i must say that i do like it...but it'd be even nicer if it was longer ^.^ I can see that the story should be pretty interesting. I want to read the rest so update, update, update! ^.^
11/22/2003 c1 linkslegend61
It is wonderful. One of those stories where you just want to keep on reading. It is also has just the right amount of detail. This clearly had a lot of effort put into it. The only thing that I don't quite like, is that the character rate is too high. As soon as you see a new character, another pops up.
It is wonderful. One of those stories where you just want to keep on reading. It is also has just the right amount of detail. This clearly had a lot of effort put into it. The only thing that I don't quite like, is that the character rate is too high. As soon as you see a new character, another pops up.
11/22/2003 c1 Neo
Its awesome! YOU GOTTA MAKE ANOTHER!
Its awesome! YOU GOTTA MAKE ANOTHER!