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10/29/2005 c1 31bjw
Ah, beautiful. I guess even though not many of us consciously think about it, life IS short... I like the metaphor you used - sunbursts - it's such a lovely word!^^ "With a trail of change and memories in our wakes. We tear through the paper corners of our lives Half blind and screaming." Really true. This really lingers in the reader's [me!:D] mind even after its end.. it's thought-provoking! I enjoyed it lots, do keep writing!:)

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