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11/3/2003 c1 8Nazgareth
Well it was good until the swear word in the 2nd last line... that just ruined the whole thing, depite it's intentions. Perhaps rephrase it with a better word or phrase, eg "Won't know the anger people say" or something like that. Otherwise it was good!

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