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1/2/2006 c1 33Tenebrific
Wow, you are really good
12/21/2004 c1 alice
wow. that is the most magnificent character of any poem. the "bird" is really touching. I like the way you show the world through so many eyes just by using this bird.
10/5/2004 c1 12restless-wandering
nice, it's rather melancholy, i like it. The symbolism is great too. Good work :)
5/21/2004 c1 460Time To Change
Beautiful.
ICT
1/25/2004 c1 63Taka and Keichirou
sugoi ne...one of the better poems ive read...excellent stuff, and great imagery...
T
12/2/2003 c1 12JazzT
Superb, and aptly named. To read it, is to understand why it's so good. Keep up the good work, this is publishable material in my humble opinion.
11/4/2003 c1 1awillingcadaver
Super. That poetry contest would be crazy to not pick you! I kind of wish that Jack weren't entering it because I'm a TAD torn on who should win...Oh well...Great job!

Love,

Lyz
11/4/2003 c1 6Windy Mountain
That was a really good poem. Among the best i've read!:)

keep writing!

CaitlinSerene

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