for A Restless Night4/15/2005 c1 
29Livi Z
I can totally relate to this poem. It was written very well! Nice imagery and such! The only thing is, I think you may have used the wrong toll in the 8th line. But thats all! Good job!
Much loveBreeze
29Livi ZI can totally relate to this poem. It was written very well! Nice imagery and such! The only thing is, I think you may have used the wrong toll in the 8th line. But thats all! Good job!
Much loveBreeze
12/11/2003 c1 John
wonderful poem you have there I can remember lots ofnights like that
wonderful poem you have there I can remember lots ofnights like that
11/5/2003 c1 christheproudfoot
nice poem. i liked the topic as well. rymed well and was not over done. come look at my stuff sometime!
nice poem. i liked the topic as well. rymed well and was not over done. come look at my stuff sometime!