for Mine1/7/2005 c1 
6BehindGreenEyes
this is incredible. incredibly awful. the stage directions suck. the lines are ridiculously riduculous and nothing a real person would EVER say. the plot is stupid. the use of diction is laughable. but not in a good way. ya, well. anyhoo. it's awful, and should never EVER be read by any human being because it could cause immediate death. like it did to me. eh. i wish it did, then i wouldn't have had to read the rest of it.
6BehindGreenEyesthis is incredible. incredibly awful. the stage directions suck. the lines are ridiculously riduculous and nothing a real person would EVER say. the plot is stupid. the use of diction is laughable. but not in a good way. ya, well. anyhoo. it's awful, and should never EVER be read by any human being because it could cause immediate death. like it did to me. eh. i wish it did, then i wouldn't have had to read the rest of it.
11/23/2003 c1 1Marlene on the Wall
Coolies. A Westing type thing. Heather needs to learn to share.
pretty good.
~Elf~
1Marlene on the WallCoolies. A Westing type thing. Heather needs to learn to share.
pretty good.
~Elf~
11/5/2003 c1 4Jeff A Stern
OH...MY...GOD!
Me and my friends make plays and our scripts are horrible but that must be the all time best storyline (that isn't an actual motion picture) that i ever read! INCREDIBLE! i'm guessing it's copyrighted though? That's too bad...Did you make the movie all ready, because if you did you MUST send it to me! (somehow)
10 out of 10 stars!
-Jeff
4Jeff A SternOH...MY...GOD!
Me and my friends make plays and our scripts are horrible but that must be the all time best storyline (that isn't an actual motion picture) that i ever read! INCREDIBLE! i'm guessing it's copyrighted though? That's too bad...Did you make the movie all ready, because if you did you MUST send it to me! (somehow)
10 out of 10 stars!
-Jeff