for My Attic2/21/2006 c1 brittany
this reminds me of flowers in the attic by vc andrews. but its nice and to the point. good job
this reminds me of flowers in the attic by vc andrews. but its nice and to the point. good job
11/20/2003 c1 crossed Ts
This just makes your mind wander...there are so many things that could happen. And with people like me, some rather unusual stuff. Anyways, i find this really captivating. Excellent way of ending off.
This just makes your mind wander...there are so many things that could happen. And with people like me, some rather unusual stuff. Anyways, i find this really captivating. Excellent way of ending off.
11/8/2003 c1 
74Etheral
Short. I would like to know what's happenning next. Will this be continued?
Great job!
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aka
Alyssha
74EtheralShort. I would like to know what's happenning next. Will this be continued?
Great job!
-3
aka
Alyssha
11/8/2003 c1 Just Wolf
wow. very tantalising. i wanted to know what happens, but i loved it the way it was too. it leaves you with a lot of unanswered questions, but it is beautiful that way, just being a moment.
wow. very tantalising. i wanted to know what happens, but i loved it the way it was too. it leaves you with a lot of unanswered questions, but it is beautiful that way, just being a moment.
11/5/2003 c1 2Laralie
Hmm...this is interesting. Are you going to continue with it? It seems to have an cool plot going, though I don't quite understand it. I hope you add more.
2LaralieHmm...this is interesting. Are you going to continue with it? It seems to have an cool plot going, though I don't quite understand it. I hope you add more.
11/5/2003 c1 anonymous
hm...I'm not sure what I think about this. Okay, that came out wrong..I do like it, and think it's a very interesting piece. It's making me wonder what was going through your head when you wrote this. The poor girl.
hm...I'm not sure what I think about this. Okay, that came out wrong..I do like it, and think it's a very interesting piece. It's making me wonder what was going through your head when you wrote this. The poor girl.
11/5/2003 c1 2BlearyEyes
This is definitely drawing me in, just because it's so mysterious. Nice job, as usual.
2BlearyEyesThis is definitely drawing me in, just because it's so mysterious. Nice job, as usual.