
5/23/2004 c2 myno
one correction:
See the widow?
He is weeping,
For he has found true love.
a widow is a woman who's husband has died, so shouldn't all the 'he's be replaced with 'she's in that stanza?
other than that, congratulations. I love you're poetry.
one correction:
See the widow?
He is weeping,
For he has found true love.
a widow is a woman who's husband has died, so shouldn't all the 'he's be replaced with 'she's in that stanza?
other than that, congratulations. I love you're poetry.
1/19/2004 c2 CrystalDreamz
aw. such a touching poem. very good very good. finally an exception to non-rhyming poems.
aw. such a touching poem. very good very good. finally an exception to non-rhyming poems.
1/19/2004 c1 CrystalDreamz
LOVED IT SO MUCH! I'm a sucker for rhyming poems so GOOD JOB! i'll read the rest lata. gotta go study.
LOVED IT SO MUCH! I'm a sucker for rhyming poems so GOOD JOB! i'll read the rest lata. gotta go study.
1/11/2004 c9 The First Knight of Jane
Beautiful. I love your poetry. It is always so uplifting. It seems amazing that you can dwell on God with such conviction. Your words are an amazing tribute.
PS Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while.
Beautiful. I love your poetry. It is always so uplifting. It seems amazing that you can dwell on God with such conviction. Your words are an amazing tribute.
PS Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while.
1/2/2004 c3
148JJR Meerraf
That was cool how you ended it! I loved reading it, it just flowed so well! Excellent!

That was cool how you ended it! I loved reading it, it just flowed so well! Excellent!
1/2/2004 c2 JJR Meerraf
Another wonderful Christian poem! I love reading your work! It's very inspiring!
Another wonderful Christian poem! I love reading your work! It's very inspiring!
12/17/2003 c5
82pippin tomson
wow, this is really touching, and the words are asimple but bear such significance.
pippin.
p.s. I hope I spelt that right.

wow, this is really touching, and the words are asimple but bear such significance.
pippin.
p.s. I hope I spelt that right.
12/13/2003 c8
34Wasted Postage
Oh yes! A miracle indeed! Amazing, amazing work!
Oh! I absolutely LOVED it! Excellent!
~*~AbunaiChikara

Oh yes! A miracle indeed! Amazing, amazing work!
Oh! I absolutely LOVED it! Excellent!
~*~AbunaiChikara
12/13/2003 c7 Wasted Postage
Another truly amazing poem! This was beautiful! Ah! I loved it! *applauds*
Splendid work!
~*~AbunaiChikara
Another truly amazing poem! This was beautiful! Ah! I loved it! *applauds*
Splendid work!
~*~AbunaiChikara
12/13/2003 c6 Wasted Postage
Wow. This is definately one of your best poems! I loved it! Oh yes, I am SO glad that He came!
Excellent, excellent work!
~*~AbunaiChikara
Wow. This is definately one of your best poems! I loved it! Oh yes, I am SO glad that He came!
Excellent, excellent work!
~*~AbunaiChikara