for A flower's ride6/6/2005 c1 Silk Weaker
Nice, but punctuation- try using them in your poetry. I don't understand why not.
Also, the metaphor isn't specific enough, the imagery is well done though.
Nice, but punctuation- try using them in your poetry. I don't understand why not.
Also, the metaphor isn't specific enough, the imagery is well done though.
1/19/2004 c1 
121Seeker of the Way
OK! ::claps:: This is VERY nice! Yep, this is what I was talking about ... more ethereal! cool!
121Seeker of the WayOK! ::claps:: This is VERY nice! Yep, this is what I was talking about ... more ethereal! cool!
1/18/2004 c1 60To-Speak
i love haikus, they're so much fun to read and write! and you write beautiful ones. you're very good with words! (thank you very much for the review on Theater Games, reviews are always great to receive!)
60To-Speaki love haikus, they're so much fun to read and write! and you write beautiful ones. you're very good with words! (thank you very much for the review on Theater Games, reviews are always great to receive!)