for Protector3/21/2006 c7 Morwennia
Once again, a great chapter. Could you just please stop spelling really weird when you are replying to reviews? Bye!
Once again, a great chapter. Could you just please stop spelling really weird when you are replying to reviews? Bye!
3/21/2006 c4 Morwennia
The scene with Aiur saying that she liked God was really cute. I liked this, period. Bye!
The scene with Aiur saying that she liked God was really cute. I liked this, period. Bye!
3/21/2006 c2 Morwennia
Well, first of all, the style should be a bit more descriptive. If it were, then it would be exactly like J. R. R. Tolkien's style. It has perfect spelling and grammar. Bye!
Well, first of all, the style should be a bit more descriptive. If it were, then it would be exactly like J. R. R. Tolkien's style. It has perfect spelling and grammar. Bye!
2/13/2006 c2 poo
i thought it was a bit dumb. i like south park better
i thought it was a bit dumb. i like south park better
1/26/2006 c1 Amy
hi kait, first off i want to say that i love both this story and the prequel. but that wasn't really what i wanted to talk about; it's actually about your personal views on the stories. having read your profile i was really disappointed with the way you didn't appear to appreciate any talent you have- you have a lot of dedicated readers here on fictionpress yet all you did was constantly put yourself down- it didn't even seem like you appreciated the award for Protector which the readers voted for. all the negative comments really put me off your stories- before they were some of my favourites. i'm sorry if you feel this is irrelevant since it's not even critisizm of the actual stories, but it's really affected the way i read your work. feel free to email me and bitch about what i've written here-if you care at all, which you don't seem to. just thought you might like to be made aware what an effect your personal attitude can have on some readers.
Amy
hi kait, first off i want to say that i love both this story and the prequel. but that wasn't really what i wanted to talk about; it's actually about your personal views on the stories. having read your profile i was really disappointed with the way you didn't appear to appreciate any talent you have- you have a lot of dedicated readers here on fictionpress yet all you did was constantly put yourself down- it didn't even seem like you appreciated the award for Protector which the readers voted for. all the negative comments really put me off your stories- before they were some of my favourites. i'm sorry if you feel this is irrelevant since it's not even critisizm of the actual stories, but it's really affected the way i read your work. feel free to email me and bitch about what i've written here-if you care at all, which you don't seem to. just thought you might like to be made aware what an effect your personal attitude can have on some readers.
Amy
1/20/2006 c36 Alenor
oh ok i love this fic. but i really wanted fenix and aiur to be together. i'm gonna go read the sequel and hopefully they will find each other and forgive each other there. ahh well, cya later ~ Alenor.
oh ok i love this fic. but i really wanted fenix and aiur to be together. i'm gonna go read the sequel and hopefully they will find each other and forgive each other there. ahh well, cya later ~ Alenor.
1/18/2006 c2 Readers
Hi aiur,
Congratulations for your find work! You are the winner of best story of 2004 in the drama category! Keep up the great work and don’t forget to vote for your favorite story for 2005.
One again congratulations on your win and you very much earned it!
Hi aiur,
Congratulations for your find work! You are the winner of best story of 2004 in the drama category! Keep up the great work and don’t forget to vote for your favorite story for 2005.
One again congratulations on your win and you very much earned it!
12/22/2005 c9 Jesslyn
Oops I saw someone else commenting on that already. Sorry =X Other than that, your story is really great XD
Oops I saw someone else commenting on that already. Sorry =X Other than that, your story is really great XD
12/22/2005 c6 Jesslyn
I dont mean to offend you, but aren't princesses and all those supposed to be during the medieval times? How come there are cameras, lasers and all? Just thought I would point that out.
I dont mean to offend you, but aren't princesses and all those supposed to be during the medieval times? How come there are cameras, lasers and all? Just thought I would point that out.
12/9/2005 c36 
7BangBangYourDead
wow great story. I will kill myself if she goes through with maloy.
I loved it.
7BangBangYourDeadwow great story. I will kill myself if she goes through with maloy.
I loved it.
12/6/2005 c24 KaronePrincess
Hi Aiur,
this story is GREAT!
Aw...Fenix is in love with her, but she still doen't know. She kept talking about Malloy. Poor...Fenix!I love it. I'm not finish reading the story yet, but will later and leave on comments!
Great job! I think I will read "Protector II" after this. "Protector", what a great title? I like the title that you created!
Thanks!
KaronePrincess
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Hi Aiur,
this story is GREAT!
Aw...Fenix is in love with her, but she still doen't know. She kept talking about Malloy. Poor...Fenix!I love it. I'm not finish reading the story yet, but will later and leave on comments!
Great job! I think I will read "Protector II" after this. "Protector", what a great title? I like the title that you created!
Thanks!
KaronePrincess
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11/28/2005 c1 Readers
Congratulations! This fic has been nominated for the Best Romance Fiction of 2004. The voting began yesterday and will go on till Jan 15th. Please inform your readers in your next update to visit my profile.
Thank You.
Congratulations! This fic has been nominated for the Best Romance Fiction of 2004. The voting began yesterday and will go on till Jan 15th. Please inform your readers in your next update to visit my profile.
Thank You.
10/26/2005 c36 humph
hahas... actually tis story isnt as bad as u make it out ta b... lolx... ya gotta learn to be a lil more confident yeah? hehe...
ur storiez ending was really quite unexpected... at least fer me... n urm... duh malloy guy was really evil. hahas.
der were a few parts quite shocking, but all in all i'm extremely happy with how it all turned out. especially aft finding out that theres a sequel yea...*winks*
newaies, jus wanna say tt i'm reallie glad tt u actually noe wad bemused means...if u used it in here tt is... i cant rmb if it was ur stry, but, if u used it, den i'm pretty sure u got it rite... i mean, loads of ppl tink it means ammused.. yeah... hahas.
well, tt's all fer now, n erm, i gotta go read ur sequel...so, if u'll excuse me...
luved ur stry , rawk on...
hahas... actually tis story isnt as bad as u make it out ta b... lolx... ya gotta learn to be a lil more confident yeah? hehe...
ur storiez ending was really quite unexpected... at least fer me... n urm... duh malloy guy was really evil. hahas.
der were a few parts quite shocking, but all in all i'm extremely happy with how it all turned out. especially aft finding out that theres a sequel yea...*winks*
newaies, jus wanna say tt i'm reallie glad tt u actually noe wad bemused means...if u used it in here tt is... i cant rmb if it was ur stry, but, if u used it, den i'm pretty sure u got it rite... i mean, loads of ppl tink it means ammused.. yeah... hahas.
well, tt's all fer now, n erm, i gotta go read ur sequel...so, if u'll excuse me...
luved ur stry , rawk on...
8/21/2005 c2 angie
wow. ur a great author.
wow. ur a great author.