for Royal Trepidations12/17/2019 c26 
2Velathria
Hi I really enjoyed your story... I have to say I pretty much like everyone which is usually pretty rare xD I see you haven't updated since 2008.. Is this Still ongoing because I'd love to see where this is going :) just one little thing I'd like to see is more single development of each character... It seems just that it is focused on just the romance sometimes and I feel this "trial" Ara is undergoing should be her own and a way for her to grow into the mage is supposed to be... Ofc Torrine needs to have a quest too but I feel like they need to find who they are in this war by themselves, you know? Hopefully you get what I mean. :) and hopefully I get to see another chapter soon :)
2VelathriaHi I really enjoyed your story... I have to say I pretty much like everyone which is usually pretty rare xD I see you haven't updated since 2008.. Is this Still ongoing because I'd love to see where this is going :) just one little thing I'd like to see is more single development of each character... It seems just that it is focused on just the romance sometimes and I feel this "trial" Ara is undergoing should be her own and a way for her to grow into the mage is supposed to be... Ofc Torrine needs to have a quest too but I feel like they need to find who they are in this war by themselves, you know? Hopefully you get what I mean. :) and hopefully I get to see another chapter soon :)
10/12/2018 c26 75AlysonSerenaStone
Wonderful story! I really do wish that you would come back and finish it.
75AlysonSerenaStoneWonderful story! I really do wish that you would come back and finish it.
8/12/2017 c3 LuminousQueen
Great story so far! I especially loved your description of Torrine as a "demon from hell." For your own benefit, though, I think there were a few commas and other such grammatical marks missing from this chapter. Great job; very engaging!
Great story so far! I especially loved your description of Torrine as a "demon from hell." For your own benefit, though, I think there were a few commas and other such grammatical marks missing from this chapter. Great job; very engaging!
4/30/2017 c3 heisperias
Love love love your writing style! I'm so happy I found your book, and I can't wait to read more! You've definitely got a wonderful talent :)
Love love love your writing style! I'm so happy I found your book, and I can't wait to read more! You've definitely got a wonderful talent :)
12/23/2016 c26 blu sclera
Nice story . ...please update .
how. r u doing ? I really like ur story...it's cute ...hope u r doing. well
& That u will update soon ...MERRY XMAS
Nice story . ...please update .
how. r u doing ? I really like ur story...it's cute ...hope u r doing. well
& That u will update soon ...MERRY XMAS
6/27/2015 c26 TurtlesCrossing
Is it terrible to say that I feel lied to? I have so much hope for you to finish you writings and it is an incredible story that should be told, by an author that is just as incredible. I could only picture your words and hope that one day it will grace the world again. I stumbled and have fallen. Fallen for your story and characters. Please consider writing again. It's been quite a longtime but time is just a number in a universe that finds an excitement with every move we make.
Is it terrible to say that I feel lied to? I have so much hope for you to finish you writings and it is an incredible story that should be told, by an author that is just as incredible. I could only picture your words and hope that one day it will grace the world again. I stumbled and have fallen. Fallen for your story and characters. Please consider writing again. It's been quite a longtime but time is just a number in a universe that finds an excitement with every move we make.
1/11/2015 c26 2bubublacz
Ohhh I really love your story! Can't wait to find out what happens next! :D Thank you!
2bubublaczOhhh I really love your story! Can't wait to find out what happens next! :D Thank you!
12/27/2014 c5 Chika
I love it so far! Both the characters are growing in their personalities, and the story is moving along great. I look forward to reading the rest.
I love it so far! Both the characters are growing in their personalities, and the story is moving along great. I look forward to reading the rest.
12/7/2014 c26 augmentedDREAMS
Oh Goddess! Why haven't you updated! You said you're back and it has been how many- almost seven years!
I don't approve of you leaving this... This MASTERPIECE like this! You have to complete this! I am literally in love with Royal Trepidations..i have never read something so great... So well written... So... So. Just plain amazing! Are you hearing me!? Do you understand? I NEED you to come back! Please! PLEASE! Come back! *weeps hysterically*
Oh Goddess! Why haven't you updated! You said you're back and it has been how many- almost seven years!
I don't approve of you leaving this... This MASTERPIECE like this! You have to complete this! I am literally in love with Royal Trepidations..i have never read something so great... So well written... So... So. Just plain amazing! Are you hearing me!? Do you understand? I NEED you to come back! Please! PLEASE! Come back! *weeps hysterically*
11/17/2014 c11 Guest
Gah! ThIs chapter made me so happy!
Gah! ThIs chapter made me so happy!
8/7/2014 c26 3ZzzSleepzz
Hello, Hello
Just stating, i guess ill be another person that'll be checking this Story once a year
Thanks for the read so far though 3
3ZzzSleepzzHello, Hello
Just stating, i guess ill be another person that'll be checking this Story once a year
Thanks for the read so far though 3
1/8/2014 c26 ImmaPiratte
Wah... oh no, I've reached the last chapter published so far... I guess I'll have to wait for the next one! I'll be waiting!
Wah... oh no, I've reached the last chapter published so far... I guess I'll have to wait for the next one! I'll be waiting!
1/7/2014 c26 Supreme Conscious
Nice story. Although it's been WAY longer than a month since you last updated. (Seriously it's currently friggin 2014 now! How long does it take for you authors to update!)
Nice story. Although it's been WAY longer than a month since you last updated. (Seriously it's currently friggin 2014 now! How long does it take for you authors to update!)
1/7/2014 c26 M o m o k o 1 1 0 6
Hi! Here I am again, wanting to read this story even after 5 years of waiting for an update (you may have seen my last comments from years back that I always visit this story yearly lol) please come back and update /cries/
Hi! Here I am again, wanting to read this story even after 5 years of waiting for an update (you may have seen my last comments from years back that I always visit this story yearly lol) please come back and update /cries/