Reviews: Crayons | FictionPress

6/29/2005 c1

93Venustas iaceo
Aha! That was brilliant. Just brilliant.

5/26/2005 c1 sam
"Why yes, Daddy, I do believe the best way to get revenge would be to put worm’s down stupid Suzie’s pants."

love that

2/20/2005 c1

1bahbakaleea
I love it.

4/14/2004 c1

24katmonkey
Aww. So cute and it made me laugh at the end.
*lime-girl*

11/26/2003 c1

4aragorn-lover2001
lol

my little sis liked it she laughed but i don't know if she got it!

now i think about it i dunno if i got it...

o well funny!

11/6/2003 c1

26Read Me First
ty, i'll get right on it

11/6/2003 c1

37Animagess
Oh, delicious. That was very funny. The prose was well packed into the 100 word limit, too.

A few distracting errors:

There's no " at the end of the father's suggestion.

It's "worms" not "worm's".