for Not What It Seems2/13/2005 c15 
1pep-queen
Ooh, I like this story! Loved her reaction to Christopher's little question.
1pep-queenOoh, I like this story! Loved her reaction to Christopher's little question.
2/13/2005 c15 a fan
yay! an update! keep writing! i luv ur stuff-cant wait to see what happens next!
yay! an update! keep writing! i luv ur stuff-cant wait to see what happens next!
2/12/2005 c15 10CassandraStacy
The Plot thickens as Chris discovers the truth about Alyssia. Isn't that her real name? I kind of forgot with all the alisis's she had. Well whatever. I really like this story, please update it soon.
Luv,
Cassandra
10CassandraStacyThe Plot thickens as Chris discovers the truth about Alyssia. Isn't that her real name? I kind of forgot with all the alisis's she had. Well whatever. I really like this story, please update it soon.
Luv,
Cassandra
2/12/2005 c15 hiphiphurray
I'm a little confused about why after 15 chapters (actually it's more like 25 chapters because they are so long, not that I'm complaining ^^)you still havn't really moved the story along. I mean, yes, there's the occational entering of new characters, but seriously where is this story going? Alissa hasn't even told Chris the truth yet. :S
The reason I'm actually bothering to write this is because I really enjoy reading this story (I mean, it's on favourite list for a reason =D). If it was any other story I would properly not bother. Anyhow, keep posting, I just hope you will move the plot along faster than you have done so far. ;)
I'm a little confused about why after 15 chapters (actually it's more like 25 chapters because they are so long, not that I'm complaining ^^)you still havn't really moved the story along. I mean, yes, there's the occational entering of new characters, but seriously where is this story going? Alissa hasn't even told Chris the truth yet. :S
The reason I'm actually bothering to write this is because I really enjoy reading this story (I mean, it's on favourite list for a reason =D). If it was any other story I would properly not bother. Anyhow, keep posting, I just hope you will move the plot along faster than you have done so far. ;)
2/12/2005 c15 pixy-dizzy
Wah! I loved this chapter! It combined humor and angst perfectly together, and you're really developing the friendship between Alex and Terry. ^^ It's fantastic how the side characters are also being concentrated on. Lol, a testimony to your genius.
*sighs happily* I just love this story, and Alex is one of the most fantastic, hilarious, real characters ever. Great job. Please update soon!
Wah! I loved this chapter! It combined humor and angst perfectly together, and you're really developing the friendship between Alex and Terry. ^^ It's fantastic how the side characters are also being concentrated on. Lol, a testimony to your genius.
*sighs happily* I just love this story, and Alex is one of the most fantastic, hilarious, real characters ever. Great job. Please update soon!
2/12/2005 c15 2wanderingnachos
YES! NEW CHAPPIE! IT'S WONDERFUL! ^_^ Great job, I really like Alissa! ^_^ More, more, more! Lol... please?
Ah... poor Terry T-T Hehe, I bet Chris is gonna be hecka mad at her in the next chapter, right? Right? And when is Greg going to get thrown out of the picture? [ I don't like him very much, but I don't really know why XD Oh well, whatever you write, it'll still be wonderful! I love your style! ^^ Please update soon!
2wanderingnachosYES! NEW CHAPPIE! IT'S WONDERFUL! ^_^ Great job, I really like Alissa! ^_^ More, more, more! Lol... please?
Ah... poor Terry T-T Hehe, I bet Chris is gonna be hecka mad at her in the next chapter, right? Right? And when is Greg going to get thrown out of the picture? [ I don't like him very much, but I don't really know why XD Oh well, whatever you write, it'll still be wonderful! I love your style! ^^ Please update soon!
2/12/2005 c15 limbo-gal
mhmm, nice chapter. I'd have to say that the necklace is very suspicious though... and i like Alissa's appetite! ^_^ lol, keep up the nice work.latersEMMA
mhmm, nice chapter. I'd have to say that the necklace is very suspicious though... and i like Alissa's appetite! ^_^ lol, keep up the nice work.latersEMMA
2/12/2005 c15 5CrystalDusk
man you gotta love chris's interrogating techniques... some dude's gonna kill her eh? well actually its kinda expected. i think. ok ok im getting all confused. u really need to put in a summary of whats happened... i cant seem to remember anything! so please? shove in a summary?
5CrystalDuskman you gotta love chris's interrogating techniques... some dude's gonna kill her eh? well actually its kinda expected. i think. ok ok im getting all confused. u really need to put in a summary of whats happened... i cant seem to remember anything! so please? shove in a summary?
1/31/2005 c14 12FrenzyFan78
YAY I haven't been on this site in forever... it's so sad... but there was an update waiting for me! It's weird... I'm starting to like William more, and Alissa/Alex less. I would get so highly annoyed by people like her. ^_^
~FrenzyFan78
12FrenzyFan78YAY I haven't been on this site in forever... it's so sad... but there was an update waiting for me! It's weird... I'm starting to like William more, and Alissa/Alex less. I would get so highly annoyed by people like her. ^_^
~FrenzyFan78
1/21/2005 c14 5CrystalDusk
HAHAHAHAHA! love willie! hes funny but so in love...how weird. i reckon lance sounds kind of wrong...like too smoothish? maybe its just the hair.
5CrystalDuskHAHAHAHAHA! love willie! hes funny but so in love...how weird. i reckon lance sounds kind of wrong...like too smoothish? maybe its just the hair.
1/8/2005 c14 NoFlyingPigsHere
hey! i've got a question. what does POV mean? I know that it means their thoughts, but what does it actually stand for? i know this is a little late, but happy new year!
hey! i've got a question. what does POV mean? I know that it means their thoughts, but what does it actually stand for? i know this is a little late, but happy new year!
1/7/2005 c14 ittybittynimrod
o... nice story... heehee. really hooked on it!~nim
o... nice story... heehee. really hooked on it!~nim
1/7/2005 c14 Girl number 1
Erm okay *blinks* Yes well I'm all about constructive feedback. I think it's a good idea to use another point of view. This way the readers can get a better insight to the story threw another character as well as you develope that person and let us get to know the person more. I liked this chapter. I think you should continue with a lot of Alex point of views and also throw in a couple of others. I'm curious to see what's going to happen next.
GIRL NUMBER 1
Erm okay *blinks* Yes well I'm all about constructive feedback. I think it's a good idea to use another point of view. This way the readers can get a better insight to the story threw another character as well as you develope that person and let us get to know the person more. I liked this chapter. I think you should continue with a lot of Alex point of views and also throw in a couple of others. I'm curious to see what's going to happen next.
GIRL NUMBER 1