for Not What It Seems11/13/2003 c2 blah
I think you have your chapters switched around...
I think you have your chapters switched around...
11/8/2003 c2 
12SLigHtLy FrEaKisH
Write more! I mean like now! This instant! I demand that you post more NOW! By the by, keep up the good work!
12SLigHtLy FrEaKisHWrite more! I mean like now! This instant! I demand that you post more NOW! By the by, keep up the good work!
11/8/2003 c2 Ryyan
this such a kewl story! please please update soon! btw, is there a future love interest for Alyssa?
this such a kewl story! please please update soon! btw, is there a future love interest for Alyssa?
11/8/2003 c2 35pixy-dizzy
hurrah! *waves pom poms* even though i have no idea how to be a cheerleader and im probably never going to be one...neway, keep it up!
35pixy-dizzyhurrah! *waves pom poms* even though i have no idea how to be a cheerleader and im probably never going to be one...neway, keep it up!
11/8/2003 c1 2lil-star-goddess
I absolutely LOVE this story, even though this is the first chapter. Hurry up and update like... five times a day! Hurry! Please try my story, Too Many A's. It's not that good... but oh well. Please just try it. Update soon.
2lil-star-goddessI absolutely LOVE this story, even though this is the first chapter. Hurry up and update like... five times a day! Hurry! Please try my story, Too Many A's. It's not that good... but oh well. Please just try it. Update soon.
11/8/2003 c2 starsignLeo
e, that's not pleasent. You have to rewrite everything? bummer, oh well, I still didn't really read it butI assume it was alot like the first one. no big. Up date as soon as you can!
~Mel
e, that's not pleasent. You have to rewrite everything? bummer, oh well, I still didn't really read it butI assume it was alot like the first one. no big. Up date as soon as you can!
~Mel
11/8/2003 c2 ck
Yeah, maybe you will get more reviews if you start writing it again. I hope you do. I like this story. It is really good. Update as soon as you can so I can read the part where we left off. Thanks.
Yeah, maybe you will get more reviews if you start writing it again. I hope you do. I like this story. It is really good. Update as soon as you can so I can read the part where we left off. Thanks.
11/8/2003 c1 ck
You accidently erased it. All man that must really be annoying to have to write the whole story over again. Are you going to change anything in the story or is it going to be the same? Well, I can't wait until the next chapter.
You accidently erased it. All man that must really be annoying to have to write the whole story over again. Are you going to change anything in the story or is it going to be the same? Well, I can't wait until the next chapter.
11/7/2003 c1 StarsignLeo
NO! That totally sux, well at least you saved all your shit, right? cuz if you had to rewrite it all, then whoa, you got a problem. lol. I'm soo sorry! I hope it doesn't take too long to update what all was there before.
~Mel
NO! That totally sux, well at least you saved all your shit, right? cuz if you had to rewrite it all, then whoa, you got a problem. lol. I'm soo sorry! I hope it doesn't take too long to update what all was there before.
~Mel
11/7/2003 c1 26Hunny622XoXo
this first chapter is good...a little confusing towards the beginning...but i like it. her random thoughts make it a lot more personal...i liked it.
hunny
pleez R&R sum of my stuff, "satana" thanxx
26Hunny622XoXothis first chapter is good...a little confusing towards the beginning...but i like it. her random thoughts make it a lot more personal...i liked it.
hunny
pleez R&R sum of my stuff, "satana" thanxx
11/7/2003 c1 35pixy-dizzy
ah! i feel your pain! sorry you erased your story! tsk. must b painful. *sob* anyway, keep it up! yay! you can do it!
35pixy-dizzyah! i feel your pain! sorry you erased your story! tsk. must b painful. *sob* anyway, keep it up! yay! you can do it!
11/7/2003 c1 cOOkiMoNsteR626
hehe..sorry, too lazy to sign in AGAIN. but hey, this is a great first chapter~! lots of dialogues...but no one's complaining! ...at least, i'm not. hehe. i like how she's always rambling to herself. kinda reminds me of...me...lol. n that name, McIntyre...sounds super familiar but maib its coz i like that name n that name sounds super cool. lol.
wanted to thank u for ur reviews ;D...yeah, trying new things in writing is tough but its a good experience...i found out this year i'm a total bummer in scary stories. lol. but hey, no one's perfect right? well, keep up the good work and i hope i'll see another chapter soon~!
hehe..sorry, too lazy to sign in AGAIN. but hey, this is a great first chapter~! lots of dialogues...but no one's complaining! ...at least, i'm not. hehe. i like how she's always rambling to herself. kinda reminds me of...me...lol. n that name, McIntyre...sounds super familiar but maib its coz i like that name n that name sounds super cool. lol.
wanted to thank u for ur reviews ;D...yeah, trying new things in writing is tough but its a good experience...i found out this year i'm a total bummer in scary stories. lol. but hey, no one's perfect right? well, keep up the good work and i hope i'll see another chapter soon~!