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3/6/2004 c1 43PainHateJusticeRaceAndLife
I really enjoyed your analogies, espcially:Yet what is darkness,But a lack of light?Very beautiful and creative.You are very talented.
3/5/2004 c1 42Mr. Arnold
I like that a lot you have a good way of depicting good and evil so equally but still showing who they are. I like that type of poem seems balanced. It would be an honor if you read and reveiwed some of my work
12/31/2003 c1 3Hopes Forgotten
Wow, once again I really liked how this one ended, but I also liked the line "Forsaken by hope." Very well written.
12/9/2003 c1 3minords
One wonders who you were thinking about exactly when you were writing. Mayhaps three striped shoes? no wait, that's just me :) hey, job well done though, ever thought of doing all the colors of the rainbow?
11/29/2003 c1 34curiouzkatt
hm... limiting reagents huh? look. the exam was bad enough, being reminded of it is worse...
first two stanzas... sadness.. loneliness...
malay...
hmm.. third stanza...
er... waiting for Ma'am I-love-green-intead-red to come? calm would sure end if you're not done with your homework. hmm.. it would set most students free of the burden of thinking of how to solve chemistry that has most likely no relation to the course you'll take in college.. ^^
hmm... fourth stanza
er... temperature just dropped coz it's almost christmas?
fifth stanza...
um... you're stuck at home when there's a super typhoon on the lose?
sixth stanza..
reminds me of Yamamoto Kou's fics...
a lone teardrop is lost in the rain...
a person against all humanity?
Seventh...
a mix of emotions. unable to speak coz there are just too many.
...
that's my interpretation... i know it sucks... but at least i tried. =^-^=
RAGNAROK NA!
11/27/2003 c1 37saj aneri
whoa! i'm still trying to process my own interpretations clearly but i get what you mean by this.
11/9/2003 c1 76EternalBlackRose-85
omg! that was, wow. I don't know what else to say here. You have a real gift with poetry, and this poem is wonderful!
11/8/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
This was just great. I read this twice and a ton of different meanings came to mind.

~Heart of the Sword
11/7/2003 c1 64Samara-chan
Whoa! This was awesome! My favourite poem of yours! So freaky... I like how you put some in italics... it sounds like many people are talking... so freaky... darkness triumphs again :)

GREAT! ^^

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