for Why?2/1/2004 c1 
3DHABUZ
this poem is so awsome and so rhythematic i love it!
may i suggest reading one of my poems
3DHABUZthis poem is so awsome and so rhythematic i love it!
may i suggest reading one of my poems
1/17/2004 c1 Love and Destroy
It's so sweet and sad and full of emotion. I really like it. It's got competition with The End of the Line! (I'm obsessed with The Offspring) Sunrise
It's so sweet and sad and full of emotion. I really like it. It's got competition with The End of the Line! (I'm obsessed with The Offspring) Sunrise
1/2/2004 c1 sketchmedesire
sweet, short, smiple, and to the point! its awesome! i realli like these poems! to my favie listie poem!
sweet, short, smiple, and to the point! its awesome! i realli like these poems! to my favie listie poem!
1/2/2004 c1 41Silver Phoenix Falling
I can completely relate to this poem, having lost someone recently myself. Captured the feeling completely...
41Silver Phoenix FallingI can completely relate to this poem, having lost someone recently myself. Captured the feeling completely...
12/29/2003 c1 34Whitesiren
True, no one can unravel that mystery. Just yesterday I received a message that somebody I knew die i dnt knw him that well but still you wonder... why do people have to die? Nice poem.
34WhitesirenTrue, no one can unravel that mystery. Just yesterday I received a message that somebody I knew die i dnt knw him that well but still you wonder... why do people have to die? Nice poem.
11/9/2003 c1 demolished
That was exactly how I felt, no... how I still feel sometimes about my dad. Sometimes I wonder why things have to happen the way they did, and question God for his sanity for taking such a good man from this world. No answers were given, and none will be. The only way you'll ever get over the pain of lost is to overcome it with the pleasures and joys you recall. A person has two certain things in their lives, planned out and predictable. They are to be born, and to die sometime after. Life is unmeasured, you never know when things will happen, and when it'll all end...
That was exactly how I felt, no... how I still feel sometimes about my dad. Sometimes I wonder why things have to happen the way they did, and question God for his sanity for taking such a good man from this world. No answers were given, and none will be. The only way you'll ever get over the pain of lost is to overcome it with the pleasures and joys you recall. A person has two certain things in their lives, planned out and predictable. They are to be born, and to die sometime after. Life is unmeasured, you never know when things will happen, and when it'll all end...