for Tainted Fate4/24/2006 c19 
4rightblinkleft
oh. my. god. oh. my. god. Wub the chappy! Yay! SO HAPPY YOURE FINISHING IT! DUDE HOW DID U DO IT? AH, OOH MEE GOSHHIES WHYD AIDEN FADE AWAY? errgh ben should die like tortured, like DIE DIEe, anyways, THANKS FOR UPDATINGAND UNTIL Next time?soon i hope? LIKE VERY SOON! thanks. thanks. thanks. thanks. thanks.
4rightblinkleftoh. my. god. oh. my. god. Wub the chappy! Yay! SO HAPPY YOURE FINISHING IT! DUDE HOW DID U DO IT? AH, OOH MEE GOSHHIES WHYD AIDEN FADE AWAY? errgh ben should die like tortured, like DIE DIEe, anyways, THANKS FOR UPDATINGAND UNTIL Next time?soon i hope? LIKE VERY SOON! thanks. thanks. thanks. thanks. thanks.
1/8/2006 c14 silver
dood, i just wanna tell u dat sorry, last time i got kiked off by my sister, so like yeah, i hope u havent finished readin this yet, or like ima lose, and its gonna be like nu! SILVER LOSING? HER REP IS RUINEDD! HAha jk
dood, i just wanna tell u dat sorry, last time i got kiked off by my sister, so like yeah, i hope u havent finished readin this yet, or like ima lose, and its gonna be like nu! SILVER LOSING? HER REP IS RUINEDD! HAha jk
3/28/2005 c14 2Juniper345
u haven't added anymore chapters... =( maybe i shouldn't hit myself. =o where's the next chap! =( it left off right there... =( *tear*
2Juniper345u haven't added anymore chapters... =( maybe i shouldn't hit myself. =o where's the next chap! =( it left off right there... =( *tear*
3/28/2005 c7 Juniper345
_ aiya. I forgot about this story! *bows * gomen gomen gomen now, im just confused and lost becuase i haven't seen this is so long... =( aiya. i'm going to hit myself. i wonder what's the ratio now... i hope A+W is still in the lead...
_ aiya. I forgot about this story! *bows * gomen gomen gomen now, im just confused and lost becuase i haven't seen this is so long... =( aiya. i'm going to hit myself. i wonder what's the ratio now... i hope A+W is still in the lead...
7/24/2004 c18 2Little Precious
Wow! This story is amazing! I love all your descriptions and how every single character has a flaw =). Both Aiden and Luke are so sweet! Ben freaked me out a little hehe...
Do keep on writing (and updating)! I can't wait to see what you've got planned for us next!
If you have time, please check out my story. I'd love to hear what you have to say about it! =)
2Little PreciousWow! This story is amazing! I love all your descriptions and how every single character has a flaw =). Both Aiden and Luke are so sweet! Ben freaked me out a little hehe...
Do keep on writing (and updating)! I can't wait to see what you've got planned for us next!
If you have time, please check out my story. I'd love to hear what you have to say about it! =)
4/27/2004 c18 Faythe
Wow, I really liked this story, I'm sure you've heard that plenty of times already, so no need to embellish on that. I love Winne, her character strongly developed. I like her aura of innocence and her lurking "past life." This is one of the few stories with three dimensional characters. Although I really like your style of righting, there is one thing that I have to mention, I think that you have to develop some of the scenes and make some kind of indication when transitioning from one scene to the next. Anyways, I definitely look forward to reading the rest of the story, so update soon!
Wow, I really liked this story, I'm sure you've heard that plenty of times already, so no need to embellish on that. I love Winne, her character strongly developed. I like her aura of innocence and her lurking "past life." This is one of the few stories with three dimensional characters. Although I really like your style of righting, there is one thing that I have to mention, I think that you have to develop some of the scenes and make some kind of indication when transitioning from one scene to the next. Anyways, I definitely look forward to reading the rest of the story, so update soon!
4/18/2004 c18 2Gandella Raye
aw, poor paris. seemed luke got over it a little fast though...maybe it's just me. oh well, can't wait to read about the dance! and yay! kink isn't gonna die! whoo hooh!
2Gandella Rayeaw, poor paris. seemed luke got over it a little fast though...maybe it's just me. oh well, can't wait to read about the dance! and yay! kink isn't gonna die! whoo hooh!
4/15/2004 c18 7Lightness
heeya kid,
duude, youve really improved on your writing. your descriptions of the church at the beginning of the chapter were very nicely written. the one thing that was irksome about this chapter was that winnie and luke went to the funeral and then five minutes later, theyre talking about the dance. i just thought that that was odd. especially for luke who didnt really have too much of a reaction at all. paris was his friend but he didnt seem to feel too much.
aah well. soo what was that dream about? will you be going into that somemore in the next chapter? and im glad that kinks cancer isnt malignant. yaay.
uhm.. i think thats all i have to say. soo bye then. keep writing.
7Lightnessheeya kid,
duude, youve really improved on your writing. your descriptions of the church at the beginning of the chapter were very nicely written. the one thing that was irksome about this chapter was that winnie and luke went to the funeral and then five minutes later, theyre talking about the dance. i just thought that that was odd. especially for luke who didnt really have too much of a reaction at all. paris was his friend but he didnt seem to feel too much.
aah well. soo what was that dream about? will you be going into that somemore in the next chapter? and im glad that kinks cancer isnt malignant. yaay.
uhm.. i think thats all i have to say. soo bye then. keep writing.
4/13/2004 c18 2Juniper345
Hey hey! A furnal... and then... a change of mood...? dance...? i must have skipped some paragraphs or something like that... *changes mood*
*smirks* so... W+A won? or is it still W+L? or you just going to change the whole thingy and say W+K. I don't like Luke. Kink is fine. I am still a W+A fan tho and the ratio is...? (do u still remember?)
2Juniper345Hey hey! A furnal... and then... a change of mood...? dance...? i must have skipped some paragraphs or something like that... *changes mood*
*smirks* so... W+A won? or is it still W+L? or you just going to change the whole thingy and say W+K. I don't like Luke. Kink is fine. I am still a W+A fan tho and the ratio is...? (do u still remember?)
4/13/2004 c18 12RustPoisonedBlade
Woo! this one is good! Mysterious dreams...funerals...AND NO CANCER FOR KINK! YAY! I'm so happy. i didn't want him to die. He's cool. Well keep it going! Don't stop ,ok?
12RustPoisonedBladeWoo! this one is good! Mysterious dreams...funerals...AND NO CANCER FOR KINK! YAY! I'm so happy. i didn't want him to die. He's cool. Well keep it going! Don't stop ,ok?
4/13/2004 c18 SIlver
DEAR OH DEAR GOOF THE MOOF
I'M REVIEWIN HAPPY?
I'M IMPATIENT OF HOW SLOW YOU UPDATE THE STOROY
UR IMPAtIENT OF HOW SLOW I REVIEW!
wERE EQUAL NOW K?
CEpt, You told me I won..just at first... look...i haf proof...
MoofyisGoofy: FINE YOU WIN
TA DA
WHOT! GO ME! ANYWAY GOOFbALL..I JUST WANTED TO SAY...
THIS CHAPTA WAS VERY...
CLIFF THE HANGER
THE WORSE ONE
CUZ DO YA KNOW HOW SHORT THIS POOPIN CHAPTER WAS?
like... this much.."-" THAT SHORT! MAN OH MAN OH MAN
oh and after u finish this story, DUH CONTINUE THE OTHER ONE CUZ I READ IT , WHAT DO U EXPECT ME TO DO AFTER I READ AN UNFINISHED STORY? FINISH IT MYSELF?
ARE YOU CARZY? SO DUH U GOTTA FINISH IT GOOFBALL!
I'M GONNA GO NOW!
OH AND I DONT GET IT...why Cant that guy tell winnie he has cancer?
UPDATE SOON ! ( HOPEFULLY NOW!)
HUT HUT HUT
-SILVER
DEAR OH DEAR GOOF THE MOOF
I'M REVIEWIN HAPPY?
I'M IMPATIENT OF HOW SLOW YOU UPDATE THE STOROY
UR IMPAtIENT OF HOW SLOW I REVIEW!
wERE EQUAL NOW K?
CEpt, You told me I won..just at first... look...i haf proof...
MoofyisGoofy: FINE YOU WIN
TA DA
WHOT! GO ME! ANYWAY GOOFbALL..I JUST WANTED TO SAY...
THIS CHAPTA WAS VERY...
CLIFF THE HANGER
THE WORSE ONE
CUZ DO YA KNOW HOW SHORT THIS POOPIN CHAPTER WAS?
like... this much.."-" THAT SHORT! MAN OH MAN OH MAN
oh and after u finish this story, DUH CONTINUE THE OTHER ONE CUZ I READ IT , WHAT DO U EXPECT ME TO DO AFTER I READ AN UNFINISHED STORY? FINISH IT MYSELF?
ARE YOU CARZY? SO DUH U GOTTA FINISH IT GOOFBALL!
I'M GONNA GO NOW!
OH AND I DONT GET IT...why Cant that guy tell winnie he has cancer?
UPDATE SOON ! ( HOPEFULLY NOW!)
HUT HUT HUT
-SILVER
4/12/2004 c18 29FrostedTeardrop
Yay! that's one more chappie read! *claps* you know what I ALWAYS will say hehe.. Great chapter! It's true. I always seem a bit hyper when I am reviewing your story don't I? Hehe sorry about that. It can't be helped. I really do feel sorry for Paris, it's so sad how she died. As for Luke he does truly care about winnie doesn't he? Poor him. Poor Winnie too for that matter, all these things are happening to her. Hope it all gets better soon. Well I can't wait for your next update *nods excitedly* I can't wait to know what happens at the dance! Oh yes, and by the way I HOPE YOU GET BETTER REAL SOON!
29FrostedTeardropYay! that's one more chappie read! *claps* you know what I ALWAYS will say hehe.. Great chapter! It's true. I always seem a bit hyper when I am reviewing your story don't I? Hehe sorry about that. It can't be helped. I really do feel sorry for Paris, it's so sad how she died. As for Luke he does truly care about winnie doesn't he? Poor him. Poor Winnie too for that matter, all these things are happening to her. Hope it all gets better soon. Well I can't wait for your next update *nods excitedly* I can't wait to know what happens at the dance! Oh yes, and by the way I HOPE YOU GET BETTER REAL SOON!