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11/10/2003 c1 10Raia
Nice, but yeah, very sad. The mix of fantasy and 'real world' kind of thing is really interesting, and the pace was effective. Check over a few of the tenses just to make sure they work, but other than that it's a really thought-provoking, well written story. Good job :)
11/9/2003 c1 4Electric Spyro
man, that is depressing. nice job tho. :o)

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