for Crimson Defeat11/12/2003 c1 
196Damaged
You know, you should write a story or something for this. This poem leads the mind is so many different directions. (you have so much talent!) Excellent job on this poem! Keep up the great writing!
196DamagedYou know, you should write a story or something for this. This poem leads the mind is so many different directions. (you have so much talent!) Excellent job on this poem! Keep up the great writing!
11/10/2003 c1 70insert name here
wow, ur poems always manage to make me wonder how u manage to write so well, i really like the new style, keep writing
70insert name herewow, ur poems always manage to make me wonder how u manage to write so well, i really like the new style, keep writing
11/10/2003 c1 132Sarah Parker
Oh wow.. I like this alot. Very strong imagery and the metaphors are great.. a very creative poem, heartwrenchingingly sad. Awesome, again.
"Her longing for companionship prevails,
She will achieve this goal,
Or die in the process of trying."
Another powerful ending to another wonderful poem.
132Sarah ParkerOh wow.. I like this alot. Very strong imagery and the metaphors are great.. a very creative poem, heartwrenchingingly sad. Awesome, again.
"Her longing for companionship prevails,
She will achieve this goal,
Or die in the process of trying."
Another powerful ending to another wonderful poem.