for The Night Is Young7/24/2004 c1 Delete Name
OMG, this is wonderful! The scheme, flow, feeling, structure, and imagery were PERFECT. Have you ever been published before?
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10/10
OMG, this is wonderful! The scheme, flow, feeling, structure, and imagery were PERFECT. Have you ever been published before?
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10/10
1/3/2004 c1 
8rufflesia
You were writing this in your English exams! Wow. Oh, did I mention that I like the style you write your poems? If not then you know it. Keep it up! :)
8rufflesiaYou were writing this in your English exams! Wow. Oh, did I mention that I like the style you write your poems? If not then you know it. Keep it up! :)
1/2/2004 c1 Desert Wrath
I love how you described the nighttime! The poem flows real well, too. You obviously have a talent with writing. Keep up the good work!
-Desert Wrath
I love how you described the nighttime! The poem flows real well, too. You obviously have a talent with writing. Keep up the good work!
-Desert Wrath
12/28/2003 c1 16amethystdawn
It's beautiful. ^_^ I like your being descriptive and stuff. It improves the poem a lot.
P.S chapter 5 of Frozen Heart is up. ^_^ Thanks for the review.
16amethystdawnIt's beautiful. ^_^ I like your being descriptive and stuff. It improves the poem a lot.
P.S chapter 5 of Frozen Heart is up. ^_^ Thanks for the review.
12/20/2003 c1 3Forsakn
Whoa. This..rhymes! Not literally, but the words flow very well. Good job, and thanks for the review. :D
3ForsaknWhoa. This..rhymes! Not literally, but the words flow very well. Good job, and thanks for the review. :D
12/19/2003 c1 8Love Me CrayziE
hey, in response to your review, i feel like all writing is, is taking your experience and putting it into words, that's why the story wasnt hard for me to tell. thanx for the review tho. i like this poem, it has such a nice rhythm to it, and it paints a really clear picture, i almost feel like i'm there. keep it up!
8Love Me CrayziEhey, in response to your review, i feel like all writing is, is taking your experience and putting it into words, that's why the story wasnt hard for me to tell. thanx for the review tho. i like this poem, it has such a nice rhythm to it, and it paints a really clear picture, i almost feel like i'm there. keep it up!
12/14/2003 c1 Grey-eyed-dream-chaser
Slightly confusing if you're not used to those kinds of poems, but I've written several like that (none of them posted). I like it. I'll try to r&r at least one of your stories, but right now I have to write a research report.
Slightly confusing if you're not used to those kinds of poems, but I've written several like that (none of them posted). I like it. I'll try to r&r at least one of your stories, but right now I have to write a research report.
12/4/2003 c1 5Blue Ketchup
This poem is beautiful. It left me with a warm, fuzzy feeling. I absolutely LOVE your work! You are definately going on my favorite list!
5Blue KetchupThis poem is beautiful. It left me with a warm, fuzzy feeling. I absolutely LOVE your work! You are definately going on my favorite list!
11/24/2003 c1 12Meioku
You are a very good poet, you can make things rhyme and express your thoughts.
Thank you for reviewing my poems too!
12MeiokuYou are a very good poet, you can make things rhyme and express your thoughts.
Thank you for reviewing my poems too!
11/23/2003 c1 82pippin tomson
I can't describe the feeling this has left withing in me, buit it's such a wonderful feeling, coming from such a wonderful poem! I love this work!
82pippin tomsonI can't describe the feeling this has left withing in me, buit it's such a wonderful feeling, coming from such a wonderful poem! I love this work!
11/22/2003 c1 148JJR Meerraf
I've done some of my best work in the middle of tests! :-).
I loved these lines:
"Yes, I said, let us go,
To hither, to thither,
To whither one knows,
As far as the great dome abodes."
That paragraph was just beautiful! It flowed so well. Magnificent work!
148JJR MeerrafI've done some of my best work in the middle of tests! :-).
I loved these lines:
"Yes, I said, let us go,
To hither, to thither,
To whither one knows,
As far as the great dome abodes."
That paragraph was just beautiful! It flowed so well. Magnificent work!
11/21/2003 c1 8Rhapsodic Melancholy
*pause for a moment of joyous reflection* wow that was really good... Dont take this the wrong way, but i dont think you should add more. I think the poem is perfect as it is. Often, even great poems can grow to tedium if overextended. Please dont let that happen to this one. Your style is very interesting, and your imagery is much better than I myself could ever manage. Kudos.
~melancholy~
¿questions?
8Rhapsodic Melancholy*pause for a moment of joyous reflection* wow that was really good... Dont take this the wrong way, but i dont think you should add more. I think the poem is perfect as it is. Often, even great poems can grow to tedium if overextended. Please dont let that happen to this one. Your style is very interesting, and your imagery is much better than I myself could ever manage. Kudos.
~melancholy~
¿questions?
11/11/2003 c1 desolation and destiny
WOW! That is one gorgeous poem! Ah! What beauty... what excelent description! I love it! Write more!
WOW! That is one gorgeous poem! Ah! What beauty... what excelent description! I love it! Write more!