for The Spider9/3/2005 c2 Nickster25
why would this only be a one shot story? this is so good. i have my own vampire story and this one is much better.
why would this only be a one shot story? this is so good. i have my own vampire story and this one is much better.
2/12/2004 c1 
22glitch804
freaky story, but thanx 4 the review, actually Tristan is a boy and girl name, just sounds different. I don't know I'm used to it because i know a girl named Tristan(although this has nothing to do with her)
-glitch- ^_^
22glitch804freaky story, but thanx 4 the review, actually Tristan is a boy and girl name, just sounds different. I don't know I'm used to it because i know a girl named Tristan(although this has nothing to do with her)
-glitch- ^_^
12/23/2003 c2 7Lightness
the whole falling-in-love thing seemed to happen really abruptly but oo well. im glad youve continued this piece. it really is very good.
keep writing, kid. happy holidays and what not. bye.
7Lightnessthe whole falling-in-love thing seemed to happen really abruptly but oo well. im glad youve continued this piece. it really is very good.
keep writing, kid. happy holidays and what not. bye.
12/21/2003 c1 1Rob Riemensnyder
Great story! I had a great time reading it this morning. Kept me glued to my seat the whole time. I'm going to read some more of your work over the holiday. Keep up the awesome work!
1Rob RiemensnyderGreat story! I had a great time reading it this morning. Kept me glued to my seat the whole time. I'm going to read some more of your work over the holiday. Keep up the awesome work!
12/20/2003 c1 4FrOg-On-A-lIlY-pAd
wow! this is really good. Keep writing cause i want to know what happens! 10/10:D merry xmas one and all!
4FrOg-On-A-lIlY-pAdwow! this is really good. Keep writing cause i want to know what happens! 10/10:D merry xmas one and all!
11/19/2003 c1 41Silver Phoenix Falling
I enjoyed reading this story a lot! My only complaint is that it should be longer. Can't wait for the next chapter, if there is one!
41Silver Phoenix FallingI enjoyed reading this story a lot! My only complaint is that it should be longer. Can't wait for the next chapter, if there is one!