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10/20/2004 c16 30Roadside Dryer
woah, long wait there. :), good chap...i had almost forgotten that he had died, actually until you said it i did forget. *laugh* good job. (is this the last chap or just a really good ending?)
6/30/2004 c15 20HannahMarieWillow
yes, still good, but in the last chapter theres, i feel, 2 much lyrics n hardly ne story
6/30/2004 c12 HannahMarieWillow
I AM VERY INSULTED TH@ SHE WAS WEARING A KILL HANNAH TSHIRT! good story, its interesting and its got all sorts of twists and turns u cant predict! so v gd!
5/22/2004 c15 8Raven Oghma
This is a truly lovely story. I read it all in one sitting. I sincerely hope you don't plan on leaving it as is. Wonderful, wonderful job.
-Raven Oghma
1/22/2004 c15 4enchanted-littlelies
Again, Great chapter! I can't wait to read the next one!
1/22/2004 c14 enchanted-littlelies
Great chapter!
1/20/2004 c15 34Iris Devine
hey! Sorry it took me so long to read this chapter, but I've been lazy. Anyways, great chapter! When you say Creep is a new song, do you mean it's new to Ariel or is it to show that this story takes place in the time of when Creep was new?
1/15/2004 c15 5SapphireBlossom
good. how old is this girl sposed t obe?
1/14/2004 c15 30Roadside Dryer
Good, not very interestin, good though. Okay sorry bout that up there but, i guess I'm just an action freak. I love that radiohead song, creep. I love the part "I want a perfect body, I want a perfect soul." So good! Great job, good job, interesting (ignore me, i'm in a bad mood) good job, Updates soon!
1/4/2004 c14 34Iris Devine
Whoo! Great chapter! NIN! WHO! Good job describing her feelings, as usual :)
1/4/2004 c14 1Okami Hikage
Ah, I enjoyed the more journal feel of this chapter. It really lets you know how Ariel really feels. Everyone has dark thoughts, and a lot of people just keep it to themselves. I think it's refreshing reading what the characters really think. Great job. ^_^
-Sar
1/4/2004 c9 5SapphireBlossom
your story is so good and sad
1/3/2004 c14 30Roadside Dryer
Ya! Thank goddess that you didn't put the song as by Johnny Cash..grr, i mean how could nine inch nails let HIM steal THEIR great awesome song? Good job but next time i hope it's a little longer, i mean with all of the time you've had! Good job, update soon.
12/14/2003 c13 Roadside Dryer
good, poor sharon. It's okay it was short, sorry it took so long for me to read.. terribly busy! Keep going I will try to update soon.
12/14/2003 c13 4enchanted-littlelies
Great chapter. Update soon!
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