10/20/2004 c16 30Roadside Dryer
woah, long wait there. :), good chap...i had almost forgotten that he had died, actually until you said it i did forget. *laugh* good job. (is this the last chap or just a really good ending?)
woah, long wait there. :), good chap...i had almost forgotten that he had died, actually until you said it i did forget. *laugh* good job. (is this the last chap or just a really good ending?)
6/30/2004 c15 20HannahMarieWillow
yes, still good, but in the last chapter theres, i feel, 2 much lyrics n hardly ne story
yes, still good, but in the last chapter theres, i feel, 2 much lyrics n hardly ne story
6/30/2004 c12 HannahMarieWillow
I AM VERY INSULTED TH@ SHE WAS WEARING A KILL HANNAH TSHIRT! good story, its interesting and its got all sorts of twists and turns u cant predict! so v gd!
I AM VERY INSULTED TH@ SHE WAS WEARING A KILL HANNAH TSHIRT! good story, its interesting and its got all sorts of twists and turns u cant predict! so v gd!
5/22/2004 c15 8Raven Oghma
This is a truly lovely story. I read it all in one sitting. I sincerely hope you don't plan on leaving it as is. Wonderful, wonderful job.
-Raven Oghma
This is a truly lovely story. I read it all in one sitting. I sincerely hope you don't plan on leaving it as is. Wonderful, wonderful job.
-Raven Oghma
1/20/2004 c15 34Iris Devine
hey! Sorry it took me so long to read this chapter, but I've been lazy. Anyways, great chapter! When you say Creep is a new song, do you mean it's new to Ariel or is it to show that this story takes place in the time of when Creep was new?
hey! Sorry it took me so long to read this chapter, but I've been lazy. Anyways, great chapter! When you say Creep is a new song, do you mean it's new to Ariel or is it to show that this story takes place in the time of when Creep was new?
1/14/2004 c15 30Roadside Dryer
Good, not very interestin, good though. Okay sorry bout that up there but, i guess I'm just an action freak. I love that radiohead song, creep. I love the part "I want a perfect body, I want a perfect soul." So good! Great job, good job, interesting (ignore me, i'm in a bad mood) good job, Updates soon!
Good, not very interestin, good though. Okay sorry bout that up there but, i guess I'm just an action freak. I love that radiohead song, creep. I love the part "I want a perfect body, I want a perfect soul." So good! Great job, good job, interesting (ignore me, i'm in a bad mood) good job, Updates soon!
1/4/2004 c14 34Iris Devine
Whoo! Great chapter! NIN! WHO! Good job describing her feelings, as usual :)
Whoo! Great chapter! NIN! WHO! Good job describing her feelings, as usual :)
1/4/2004 c14 1Okami Hikage
Ah, I enjoyed the more journal feel of this chapter. It really lets you know how Ariel really feels. Everyone has dark thoughts, and a lot of people just keep it to themselves. I think it's refreshing reading what the characters really think. Great job. ^_^
-Sar
Ah, I enjoyed the more journal feel of this chapter. It really lets you know how Ariel really feels. Everyone has dark thoughts, and a lot of people just keep it to themselves. I think it's refreshing reading what the characters really think. Great job. ^_^
-Sar
1/3/2004 c14 30Roadside Dryer
Ya! Thank goddess that you didn't put the song as by Johnny Cash..grr, i mean how could nine inch nails let HIM steal THEIR great awesome song? Good job but next time i hope it's a little longer, i mean with all of the time you've had! Good job, update soon.
Ya! Thank goddess that you didn't put the song as by Johnny Cash..grr, i mean how could nine inch nails let HIM steal THEIR great awesome song? Good job but next time i hope it's a little longer, i mean with all of the time you've had! Good job, update soon.
12/14/2003 c13 Roadside Dryer
good, poor sharon. It's okay it was short, sorry it took so long for me to read.. terribly busy! Keep going I will try to update soon.
good, poor sharon. It's okay it was short, sorry it took so long for me to read.. terribly busy! Keep going I will try to update soon.