for Twelve Minutes6/25/2004 c1 
18Val Mora
So what has he foreseen? The doctors' demise, or his own? Or just something else? Is he trying to tell them the story because he no longer has a pen?
I wonder. It's creepy and strange and curious. I'm not certain whether I believe he's mad or prescient... it's gorgeous, either way. Wonderful, lovely, painfully beautiful job. I like this very much, and the voice in which you wrote the narrator immediately draws you in and keeps you there, kind of like his thoughts/stories do to him. Wonderful story. ^_^
18Val MoraSo what has he foreseen? The doctors' demise, or his own? Or just something else? Is he trying to tell them the story because he no longer has a pen?
I wonder. It's creepy and strange and curious. I'm not certain whether I believe he's mad or prescient... it's gorgeous, either way. Wonderful, lovely, painfully beautiful job. I like this very much, and the voice in which you wrote the narrator immediately draws you in and keeps you there, kind of like his thoughts/stories do to him. Wonderful story. ^_^
11/15/2003 c1 Reinairi
I thought it was a highly well-written piece of work. Its really lets you see what Merill is like and what he thinks and how he works.
As always, insanity is only a differing genius.
P.S. Dont ask about my name
I thought it was a highly well-written piece of work. Its really lets you see what Merill is like and what he thinks and how he works.
As always, insanity is only a differing genius.
P.S. Dont ask about my name