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11/17/2003 c1 cobster
About "Profound:"

I did mean it to have a slight profound theme; just the little notion that things some people think are meaningful are just garbage to others, and vice-versa. You might not have gotten it, since you might just not think of it as a profound poem. Thanks either way!
11/15/2003 c1 The Anonymous Imposter
Truly a great peice of work, which seems to be loosley based off of something alot bigger.

This poem could turn into a clever story...

Or I could be high-strung on crack...

I finish this reveiw with words of an uneducated person: M Marshmellows...
11/15/2003 c1 76Cobster
It seems to me like you meant to spell 'Marshmallow' wrong. If you did, good job. It fits. If you didn't, keep it like this. It fits anyway.

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