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2/29/2008 c2 starauthor23
Very good, interesting chapter. I'm curious to see how the stages of Bardo play out.
4/2/2005 c1 starauthor23
Well, I read this last night (fanfiction.net was down and I had nowhere to turn), but I didn't get my confirmation e-mail till now so, without re-reading the story, I'll work on a pretty thorough review. Actually, I'll probably just say I really liked it, because I really did. It was unique, but also old-school. I felt like I could see everything going on (I had a little difficulty picturing the ghost, but as she's apparently a main character, I won't have that problem for much longer). I felt like I was watching a movie/show, so you did a great job. Erm, you don't really have any errors I can think of, and the scene in the attic was very suspenseful. You seem a little light on actually describing the action that's going on, but the story and character's are so rich that I just don't give a crap. I'm gonna read more, but It'll be a while. I have a ton of chappys to read on ff.net, so I won't be really rolling around back to fp.com in a while. Loved it though.
3/5/2005 c8 Rock My Socks
YAY! I love your battle scene, and how Hikari And Shinzou get along. You do a great job with descriptions. The only thing I suggest is that you describe His reaper form a bit more. I was just a little confused about that.By the way, i know this sounds weird, but do you mind if I do some fanart? I want to draw Hikari, but it would require a little bit of physical description on your part.Oh, before I forget, you've inspired me. I'm going to participate in NaNoWriMo this year, because it looks awesome!Keep posting in this story!-Rock My Socks
12/9/2004 c8 90poetic abortion
*_* Nice. Very nice.

~ Noelle ~
10/23/2004 c8 Lee
Yes! new chapter, new charecter, and more amusing arguements on the horizon.
8/13/2004 c7 Lee
The fight scences are awesome, I also love the way Shinzou, and Hikari act and react to each other in each new situation.
7/22/2004 c7 2Sakura Kuonji
*squeal of joy* BATTLE SCENES! HAPPINESS! *dance* Anyway, that was an excellently-written piece of action, and I don't just say that from the viewpoint of an excessively violent girl, but as a writer. ^_^ I like this chapter. Keep up the good work!
7/22/2004 c6 Sakura Kuonji
Hey, that's no fair. What was the last riddle if the answer was shadow? Oh, I'll figure it out later. I liked that little battle of the wits thingie ^_^ As much as I love battle scenes, they weren't really in any condition to fight, were they. Keep up the good work!
7/22/2004 c5 Sakura Kuonji
New plan? Wonder what it is..Keep up the good work, and never let anything make you doubt your super-amazing writing skills!
7/22/2004 c4 Sakura Kuonji
I..love..action scenes! *giddy laugh* All the fightin' and the butt-kickin' and the EXPLOSIONS! *high-pitched squeal* Dang, you're really impressive. You should honestly get yourself an agent! Keep up the good work, and I can't wait for more of this! Which is good, considering there is more of this which I shall now go on and read. ^_^
7/22/2004 c3 Sakura Kuonji
Heehee ^_^ They'd make a cute couple if she wasn't dead. Anyway, keep up the good work, like always. *goes off to read the next chapter*
7/22/2004 c2 Sakura Kuonji
Wowie..I am in awe of your talent! Keep up the good work, and I hope you don't mind the short review. I wanna hurry up and keep reading!
7/22/2004 c1 Sakura Kuonji
Wow! I really like this one, and not just 'cause I like Shinzou a lot ^_^. I love the battle scene and the ghostiness and the funness of it all. I'm gonna stop rambling now and keep reading. I gotta know what happens!
7/8/2004 c7 10Mobius Soul
Hey, nice. REminds me of Inuyasha a bit...with the whole demonic bit. very nice fight scene.
6/30/2004 c6 Mobius Soul
Wow. This is great. I can't wait for more...
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