for Falling to the Side: 49 Days2/29/2008 c2 starauthor23
Very good, interesting chapter. I'm curious to see how the stages of Bardo play out.
Very good, interesting chapter. I'm curious to see how the stages of Bardo play out.
4/2/2005 c1 starauthor23
Well, I read this last night (fanfiction.net was down and I had nowhere to turn), but I didn't get my confirmation e-mail till now so, without re-reading the story, I'll work on a pretty thorough review. Actually, I'll probably just say I really liked it, because I really did. It was unique, but also old-school. I felt like I could see everything going on (I had a little difficulty picturing the ghost, but as she's apparently a main character, I won't have that problem for much longer). I felt like I was watching a movie/show, so you did a great job. Erm, you don't really have any errors I can think of, and the scene in the attic was very suspenseful. You seem a little light on actually describing the action that's going on, but the story and character's are so rich that I just don't give a crap. I'm gonna read more, but It'll be a while. I have a ton of chappys to read on ff.net, so I won't be really rolling around back to fp.com in a while. Loved it though.
Well, I read this last night (fanfiction.net was down and I had nowhere to turn), but I didn't get my confirmation e-mail till now so, without re-reading the story, I'll work on a pretty thorough review. Actually, I'll probably just say I really liked it, because I really did. It was unique, but also old-school. I felt like I could see everything going on (I had a little difficulty picturing the ghost, but as she's apparently a main character, I won't have that problem for much longer). I felt like I was watching a movie/show, so you did a great job. Erm, you don't really have any errors I can think of, and the scene in the attic was very suspenseful. You seem a little light on actually describing the action that's going on, but the story and character's are so rich that I just don't give a crap. I'm gonna read more, but It'll be a while. I have a ton of chappys to read on ff.net, so I won't be really rolling around back to fp.com in a while. Loved it though.
3/5/2005 c8 Rock My Socks
YAY! I love your battle scene, and how Hikari And Shinzou get along. You do a great job with descriptions. The only thing I suggest is that you describe His reaper form a bit more. I was just a little confused about that.By the way, i know this sounds weird, but do you mind if I do some fanart? I want to draw Hikari, but it would require a little bit of physical description on your part.Oh, before I forget, you've inspired me. I'm going to participate in NaNoWriMo this year, because it looks awesome!Keep posting in this story!-Rock My Socks
YAY! I love your battle scene, and how Hikari And Shinzou get along. You do a great job with descriptions. The only thing I suggest is that you describe His reaper form a bit more. I was just a little confused about that.By the way, i know this sounds weird, but do you mind if I do some fanart? I want to draw Hikari, but it would require a little bit of physical description on your part.Oh, before I forget, you've inspired me. I'm going to participate in NaNoWriMo this year, because it looks awesome!Keep posting in this story!-Rock My Socks
10/23/2004 c8 Lee
Yes! new chapter, new charecter, and more amusing arguements on the horizon.
Yes! new chapter, new charecter, and more amusing arguements on the horizon.
8/13/2004 c7 Lee
The fight scences are awesome, I also love the way Shinzou, and Hikari act and react to each other in each new situation.
The fight scences are awesome, I also love the way Shinzou, and Hikari act and react to each other in each new situation.
7/22/2004 c7 
2Sakura Kuonji
*squeal of joy* BATTLE SCENES! HAPPINESS! *dance* Anyway, that was an excellently-written piece of action, and I don't just say that from the viewpoint of an excessively violent girl, but as a writer. ^_^ I like this chapter. Keep up the good work!
2Sakura Kuonji*squeal of joy* BATTLE SCENES! HAPPINESS! *dance* Anyway, that was an excellently-written piece of action, and I don't just say that from the viewpoint of an excessively violent girl, but as a writer. ^_^ I like this chapter. Keep up the good work!
7/22/2004 c6 Sakura Kuonji
Hey, that's no fair. What was the last riddle if the answer was shadow? Oh, I'll figure it out later. I liked that little battle of the wits thingie ^_^ As much as I love battle scenes, they weren't really in any condition to fight, were they. Keep up the good work!
Hey, that's no fair. What was the last riddle if the answer was shadow? Oh, I'll figure it out later. I liked that little battle of the wits thingie ^_^ As much as I love battle scenes, they weren't really in any condition to fight, were they. Keep up the good work!
7/22/2004 c5 Sakura Kuonji
New plan? Wonder what it is..Keep up the good work, and never let anything make you doubt your super-amazing writing skills!
New plan? Wonder what it is..Keep up the good work, and never let anything make you doubt your super-amazing writing skills!
7/22/2004 c4 Sakura Kuonji
I..love..action scenes! *giddy laugh* All the fightin' and the butt-kickin' and the EXPLOSIONS! *high-pitched squeal* Dang, you're really impressive. You should honestly get yourself an agent! Keep up the good work, and I can't wait for more of this! Which is good, considering there is more of this which I shall now go on and read. ^_^
I..love..action scenes! *giddy laugh* All the fightin' and the butt-kickin' and the EXPLOSIONS! *high-pitched squeal* Dang, you're really impressive. You should honestly get yourself an agent! Keep up the good work, and I can't wait for more of this! Which is good, considering there is more of this which I shall now go on and read. ^_^
7/22/2004 c3 Sakura Kuonji
Heehee ^_^ They'd make a cute couple if she wasn't dead. Anyway, keep up the good work, like always. *goes off to read the next chapter*
Heehee ^_^ They'd make a cute couple if she wasn't dead. Anyway, keep up the good work, like always. *goes off to read the next chapter*
7/22/2004 c2 Sakura Kuonji
Wowie..I am in awe of your talent! Keep up the good work, and I hope you don't mind the short review. I wanna hurry up and keep reading!
Wowie..I am in awe of your talent! Keep up the good work, and I hope you don't mind the short review. I wanna hurry up and keep reading!
7/22/2004 c1 Sakura Kuonji
Wow! I really like this one, and not just 'cause I like Shinzou a lot ^_^. I love the battle scene and the ghostiness and the funness of it all. I'm gonna stop rambling now and keep reading. I gotta know what happens!
Wow! I really like this one, and not just 'cause I like Shinzou a lot ^_^. I love the battle scene and the ghostiness and the funness of it all. I'm gonna stop rambling now and keep reading. I gotta know what happens!
7/8/2004 c7 10Mobius Soul
Hey, nice. REminds me of Inuyasha a bit...with the whole demonic bit. very nice fight scene.
10Mobius SoulHey, nice. REminds me of Inuyasha a bit...with the whole demonic bit. very nice fight scene.