
11/30/2017 c23 acehigh
Hey man, if your still alive I just wanted to say that this story is not dumb:) it was a very nice story to read! But I am just very sad because there was no end:( I was actually at this point shipping Tristan/Seytie more then Gadi/Seytie, so when they split just because of misunderstanding situations it was very sad for me:( their reunion really brought in my feels... I don’t know if you will read this review or even if you still have an account (if you do could you answer?) but thank you for a beautiful story:):):)
Hey man, if your still alive I just wanted to say that this story is not dumb:) it was a very nice story to read! But I am just very sad because there was no end:( I was actually at this point shipping Tristan/Seytie more then Gadi/Seytie, so when they split just because of misunderstanding situations it was very sad for me:( their reunion really brought in my feels... I don’t know if you will read this review or even if you still have an account (if you do could you answer?) but thank you for a beautiful story:):):)
7/16/2009 c23
7FictionismyGame
PLEASE READ THIS WHOLE THING BECAUSE IT IS VERY IMPORTANT THAT YOU DO. IF YOU DON'T I WILL KNOW AND YOU'LL MAKE ME CRY. :( SEE SADNESS. BUT I'M BEGGING YOU TO FINISH THIS STORY!
ok, i personally think this story is very good and would like you to try and complete it. you said it only had one chapter to go and I know you can do it. i must admit i've only read a little of your story so far but i was curious about the supposed last one because it said, "Hah, you thought it was an update didn't you?" but that's kind of sad and i want you to complete this story please. no matter how much it needs editing, or makes you cry in shame, or how sucky you think it is! please write the last one. you can't leave us there on a cliff hanger and give up! you said it yourself. two years...and your going to quit like that? *snaps her fingers in a disappearing motion* come on! i know you can do it. you've written other great ones, and if you can at least get the concept or the main idea of the last chapter and write it out, then you can post it...and then finally refine it edit and stuff. please, i'm begging you with all my heart. i don't car how much you think even the last chapter sucks, as long as it gets your main idea across. then i won't hate you...not that i really do now. but please i'm on my knees. FINISH IT PLEASE! i don't care if it's on hiatus. you decided that and you can take it off. please. pretty pretty please.WRITE ME BACK IF YOU CAN, AND IF YOU DON'T I'LL JUST WRITE MORE...ENCOURAGING REVIEWS. AND WITH THAT I LEAVE YOU WIHT...
OH PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY!

PLEASE READ THIS WHOLE THING BECAUSE IT IS VERY IMPORTANT THAT YOU DO. IF YOU DON'T I WILL KNOW AND YOU'LL MAKE ME CRY. :( SEE SADNESS. BUT I'M BEGGING YOU TO FINISH THIS STORY!
ok, i personally think this story is very good and would like you to try and complete it. you said it only had one chapter to go and I know you can do it. i must admit i've only read a little of your story so far but i was curious about the supposed last one because it said, "Hah, you thought it was an update didn't you?" but that's kind of sad and i want you to complete this story please. no matter how much it needs editing, or makes you cry in shame, or how sucky you think it is! please write the last one. you can't leave us there on a cliff hanger and give up! you said it yourself. two years...and your going to quit like that? *snaps her fingers in a disappearing motion* come on! i know you can do it. you've written other great ones, and if you can at least get the concept or the main idea of the last chapter and write it out, then you can post it...and then finally refine it edit and stuff. please, i'm begging you with all my heart. i don't car how much you think even the last chapter sucks, as long as it gets your main idea across. then i won't hate you...not that i really do now. but please i'm on my knees. FINISH IT PLEASE! i don't care if it's on hiatus. you decided that and you can take it off. please. pretty pretty please.WRITE ME BACK IF YOU CAN, AND IF YOU DON'T I'LL JUST WRITE MORE...ENCOURAGING REVIEWS. AND WITH THAT I LEAVE YOU WIHT...
OH PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY!
5/21/2009 c23 wen
i loved it very much, although i wish seytie would just stay with gadi haha
i loved it very much, although i wish seytie would just stay with gadi haha
7/15/2007 c23
8Militarylver4eva
HEY...I JUST WANTED TO SAY THAT I LOVED THIS STORY AND THINK THAT THIS IS WORTHY OF BEING PUBLISHED. YEP, I SAID IT... PUBLISHED. YOU COMPLETELY ASTOUNDED ME WITH YOUR STORY TELLING. I HAVE READ ALOT OF ROMANCE NOVELS IN MY SHORT TIME ON THIS PLANET AND BY FAR, I THINK THIS HAS ALOT OF POTENTIAL FOR BEING A BEST SELLER. AND NO I AM NOT BSING YOU. LOL. I TRULY MEAN IT. I BET IF YOU SENT THIS STORY TO A PUBLISHER THEY WOULD BE WILLING TO 'MAKE YOU A OFFER YOU CAN'T REFUSE'. LOL. HAD TO PUT IN THAT GODFATHER LINE. BUT I AM TOTALLY SERIOUS. I HAVE READ SOME OF YOUR STORIES AND THINK VERY HIGHLY ABOUT YOUR POTENTIAL AS A ROMANCE WRITER. ANYWAY, I REALLY WANT YOU TO COMPLETE THIS STORY. I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT TO GADI AND SEYTIE. I WANT TO KNOW NOW THAT THE SAGE AND ULRICH HAVE MET AND KNOW THAT THEY ARE BROTHER AND SISTER, WHAT HAPPENS TO TRISTAN. I KNOW THAT IT HAS BEEN OVER 2 YEARS SINCE YOU WROTE THE LAST CHAPTER BUT I AM TOTALLY DYING TO FIND OUT HOW THIS STORY IS GOING TO END. SO PLEASE DON'T KEEP ME IN SUSPENSE. PLEASE UPDATE YOUR STORIES SOON.

HEY...I JUST WANTED TO SAY THAT I LOVED THIS STORY AND THINK THAT THIS IS WORTHY OF BEING PUBLISHED. YEP, I SAID IT... PUBLISHED. YOU COMPLETELY ASTOUNDED ME WITH YOUR STORY TELLING. I HAVE READ ALOT OF ROMANCE NOVELS IN MY SHORT TIME ON THIS PLANET AND BY FAR, I THINK THIS HAS ALOT OF POTENTIAL FOR BEING A BEST SELLER. AND NO I AM NOT BSING YOU. LOL. I TRULY MEAN IT. I BET IF YOU SENT THIS STORY TO A PUBLISHER THEY WOULD BE WILLING TO 'MAKE YOU A OFFER YOU CAN'T REFUSE'. LOL. HAD TO PUT IN THAT GODFATHER LINE. BUT I AM TOTALLY SERIOUS. I HAVE READ SOME OF YOUR STORIES AND THINK VERY HIGHLY ABOUT YOUR POTENTIAL AS A ROMANCE WRITER. ANYWAY, I REALLY WANT YOU TO COMPLETE THIS STORY. I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT TO GADI AND SEYTIE. I WANT TO KNOW NOW THAT THE SAGE AND ULRICH HAVE MET AND KNOW THAT THEY ARE BROTHER AND SISTER, WHAT HAPPENS TO TRISTAN. I KNOW THAT IT HAS BEEN OVER 2 YEARS SINCE YOU WROTE THE LAST CHAPTER BUT I AM TOTALLY DYING TO FIND OUT HOW THIS STORY IS GOING TO END. SO PLEASE DON'T KEEP ME IN SUSPENSE. PLEASE UPDATE YOUR STORIES SOON.
3/10/2006 c1
1Light tears
Wow. Very edgy. But I still love it! Now I'm going to finish reading it. But I just had to say really good so far from what I've read!
Taylor.

Wow. Very edgy. But I still love it! Now I'm going to finish reading it. But I just had to say really good so far from what I've read!
Taylor.
12/26/2005 c23 LAUREN
FINISH YOUR STORY! PLEASE OR ILL SEND MY HUMAN-EATING-SOCKS AFTER U PLZ! {gETS ON KNEES} IM BEGGING U
FINISH YOUR STORY! PLEASE OR ILL SEND MY HUMAN-EATING-SOCKS AFTER U PLZ! {gETS ON KNEES} IM BEGGING U
10/22/2005 c1 LovelyLilDevil
wow. i loved it! ive never been 2 this site, so its all a little new to me. i write Harry Potter fanfiction on a different site, so im like, used to that site. but, i liked this story. im one of those suckers for romantic stories, and this one definitly sounds a little romantic! well, i got to go keep reading!
wow. i loved it! ive never been 2 this site, so its all a little new to me. i write Harry Potter fanfiction on a different site, so im like, used to that site. but, i liked this story. im one of those suckers for romantic stories, and this one definitly sounds a little romantic! well, i got to go keep reading!
7/13/2005 c23 Aurora-Heart
no! u cnt leave it like that! when r u gona update the last chapter? i wana c wut happens! what does seytie do? who does she choose? will gadi n tristan fight? will gadi take seytie away again? or will she stay with ulrich? or will ulrich come back with gadi, sage, and seytie? but where does that leave tristan? come on u hav to post rsvp!
no! u cnt leave it like that! when r u gona update the last chapter? i wana c wut happens! what does seytie do? who does she choose? will gadi n tristan fight? will gadi take seytie away again? or will she stay with ulrich? or will ulrich come back with gadi, sage, and seytie? but where does that leave tristan? come on u hav to post rsvp!
6/9/2005 c22
9charmed03
omg! i LOVE this story! i've read your other stories as well, and i must say, i'm quite a fan! anywayz, wow! this story's really good, even though you don't like it! hehe. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let seytie stay with tristan! i like him better! for some reason he sounds hotter and definitely nicer! kill gadi or something... update SOON! it's summer, and there's no school, so update!

omg! i LOVE this story! i've read your other stories as well, and i must say, i'm quite a fan! anywayz, wow! this story's really good, even though you don't like it! hehe. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let seytie stay with tristan! i like him better! for some reason he sounds hotter and definitely nicer! kill gadi or something... update SOON! it's summer, and there's no school, so update!
5/15/2005 c22
15LiNdSaY.AP
so this is comment #2, since i decided i had more to say: can't wait to read your pharaoh story. i LOVE egypt and all. and you have 212 reviews for this! that's WAY more than i've EVER had with all my pennames and their stories put together!

so this is comment #2, since i decided i had more to say: can't wait to read your pharaoh story. i LOVE egypt and all. and you have 212 reviews for this! that's WAY more than i've EVER had with all my pennames and their stories put together!
5/15/2005 c23 LiNdSaY.AP
EXCUSE ME? did you just write off that you think this story isn't good? this is one of my ultimate FAVORITES on this entire website! it is NOT crappy, and it is NOT a 'wannabe romance'. this is very good work, and it does have potential, and i really REALLY want to read more of it, it's just got me all wrapped up. and i say you're lucky you can spend 2 years on a story. i think i've maybe finished one of mine, and it took me...maybe 3 years? and i'm still disappointed with it...anyway, you best not remove this or anything. I MUST READ MORE!
EXCUSE ME? did you just write off that you think this story isn't good? this is one of my ultimate FAVORITES on this entire website! it is NOT crappy, and it is NOT a 'wannabe romance'. this is very good work, and it does have potential, and i really REALLY want to read more of it, it's just got me all wrapped up. and i say you're lucky you can spend 2 years on a story. i think i've maybe finished one of mine, and it took me...maybe 3 years? and i'm still disappointed with it...anyway, you best not remove this or anything. I MUST READ MORE!
5/14/2005 c23 blacksunrise
aww it;'s not that bad ...well ok maybe it is but hey it worksyou've done good continue::pats shoulder::
aww it;'s not that bad ...well ok maybe it is but hey it worksyou've done good continue::pats shoulder::
4/24/2005 c23 EYpark0623
wow, i like yur story... but WOW... yur gonna have a funked up ending... well i hope yu'll have fun with it...
wow, i like yur story... but WOW... yur gonna have a funked up ending... well i hope yu'll have fun with it...