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11/5/2006 c1 22Lucid Nonsense
I thought I had reviewed this? Well done, nicely descriptive, lovely phrasing/diction. You must be too darn smart for me, because I have no idea what the heck the 'hidden message' is.
8/17/2004 c1 128Zainab
I like the double poem in this. Even though because of that, when i read the poem as a whole, it was quite distracting. But i like the idea.
2/25/2004 c1 80sleah
Aw, I like this one. Especially with the way that you can "read between the lines"...literally, lol!
~ Yabou
12/8/2003 c1 29Katterree Fengari
Woot! First review! Mad skills!
^_^
Ok, I do note the long then short lines in the format, but I have little idea of what it means...maybe that the decisions are similar but different...(they're both lines, and both in the Literature section of an action, but there's that little diff?)
The middle stanza sort of confuses me, is it sort of telling which she chooses?
I really like the ending.

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