for Assorted Bad Poems11/16/2003 c5 
39Sakura163
I hate winter! Like your poem; hate the topic! lol j/k
Again nice imagry in line 2, but kind of the same thing you said in the hockey poem!
39Sakura163I hate winter! Like your poem; hate the topic! lol j/k
Again nice imagry in line 2, but kind of the same thing you said in the hockey poem!
11/16/2003 c4 Sakura163
I didn't like this one! I think you should have stuck to couplets, it just didn't flow like your others! Well, if you practice with free verse it will get better! (by the way I can't write in ryhme!)
I didn't like this one! I think you should have stuck to couplets, it just didn't flow like your others! Well, if you practice with free verse it will get better! (by the way I can't write in ryhme!)
11/16/2003 c1 Sakura163
I thought this was a nice couplet poem!
Give yourself some credit! It was good!
I thought this was a nice couplet poem!
Give yourself some credit! It was good!