for Never Say Never11/17/2003 c1 
29McKenzie Drestire
Insperational, this poem is short and sweet and a nice piece of advise, keep it up
29McKenzie DrestireInsperational, this poem is short and sweet and a nice piece of advise, keep it up
11/17/2003 c1 17florbixblaster
nice short poem! however, try to lengthen it. i mean its lines.
life ...is just a dream. we somehow have control of it. but most of the times don't.
however it can also be a nightmare!
17florbixblasternice short poem! however, try to lengthen it. i mean its lines.
life ...is just a dream. we somehow have control of it. but most of the times don't.
however it can also be a nightmare!