for Meetings9/30/2006 c1 C.J. Tan
Just browsing by, wondering what could be read online then I stumbled to this poem. It is an interesting piece. I wonder if a story can be made from it?
Just browsing by, wondering what could be read online then I stumbled to this poem. It is an interesting piece. I wonder if a story can be made from it?
1/12/2004 c1 
20Kokeshi088
Lovely work.
It truly expresses the balances of the Art of War and the Hopes of Peace. It is itneresting how well-worded it is, as well as it is simply fantastic. i can't do that. Either way, read/review my poem "Peace", please? Thanks.
~Kokeshi088~
20Kokeshi088Lovely work.
It truly expresses the balances of the Art of War and the Hopes of Peace. It is itneresting how well-worded it is, as well as it is simply fantastic. i can't do that. Either way, read/review my poem "Peace", please? Thanks.
~Kokeshi088~
11/30/2003 c1 ZealWarrior
Your poetry amazes me, then again, I'm amazed by blue cars. That's not to say your poem wasn't fantastic, because that's exactly what it was. I love the themes of war and peace and how you managed to manifest them through conversation. The words were perfectly apt to the situation. I like the idea of the three meetings and felt that some lines were like music itself. Oh, and brilliantly done, the idea of war and peace being the same, and light and dark, etc. Well at least that's what I dechipered. I once wrote a poem similar to this, where I said life and death were the same. But it all rhymed. Anyways, fantastic job, please do write more.
Your poetry amazes me, then again, I'm amazed by blue cars. That's not to say your poem wasn't fantastic, because that's exactly what it was. I love the themes of war and peace and how you managed to manifest them through conversation. The words were perfectly apt to the situation. I like the idea of the three meetings and felt that some lines were like music itself. Oh, and brilliantly done, the idea of war and peace being the same, and light and dark, etc. Well at least that's what I dechipered. I once wrote a poem similar to this, where I said life and death were the same. But it all rhymed. Anyways, fantastic job, please do write more.
11/18/2003 c1 77ForgottenMists
Wowwie, that wa a really interesting idea. And quite true. Very interesting. Very very. Anyway, brilliant brilliant. You get the idea. Brillinat brilliant. By the way, who did you get the idea from?
77ForgottenMistsWowwie, that wa a really interesting idea. And quite true. Very interesting. Very very. Anyway, brilliant brilliant. You get the idea. Brillinat brilliant. By the way, who did you get the idea from?