for Aahhhhwhat to do3/14/2004 c1 
1Genius-Ben
I'm not a huge poetry fan, but I really like this one. It flows very well, and that's what I consider most important in poetry. The content is good too. Keep it up!
1Genius-BenI'm not a huge poetry fan, but I really like this one. It flows very well, and that's what I consider most important in poetry. The content is good too. Keep it up!
12/29/2003 c1 128ebonyheart
just to be different... avtually i havent read the other poems... but in my minds eye, just to be different, no I don't agree... Why have one when you can have them both lol... In fact that's what I want to do after school... Study criminal law lol... But I once again know what you mean. Good poem keep it goin!
128ebonyheartjust to be different... avtually i havent read the other poems... but in my minds eye, just to be different, no I don't agree... Why have one when you can have them both lol... In fact that's what I want to do after school... Study criminal law lol... But I once again know what you mean. Good poem keep it goin!
12/6/2003 c1 acccountkiller
Euh...no, this is a very good poem, and original so it proves you don't write cliche lines and all. And yea, I'm rich, a teenager but all the same, and my poems mean more to me than all my stuff. Keep writing you are talented! Love,Mia
Euh...no, this is a very good poem, and original so it proves you don't write cliche lines and all. And yea, I'm rich, a teenager but all the same, and my poems mean more to me than all my stuff. Keep writing you are talented! Love,Mia
11/29/2003 c1 18James Lagoski
I really enjoyed reading this piece-
At some point or another each of us that writes the thoughts pouring through our hands wonders why it is
we do it-
To get rich-
To be recognized-
Personal satisfaction-
What ever the reason we are compelled
to write-
This write certainly expressed that
feeling well-
Best Wishes-
James
18James LagoskiI really enjoyed reading this piece-
At some point or another each of us that writes the thoughts pouring through our hands wonders why it is
we do it-
To get rich-
To be recognized-
Personal satisfaction-
What ever the reason we are compelled
to write-
This write certainly expressed that
feeling well-
Best Wishes-
James