1/3/2004 c2 106cosmo-queen
Lol. These jokes are actually funny, which is a nice change. There were so many that I liked. School is made a bit more tolerable when you have something to laugh about. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
Lol. These jokes are actually funny, which is a nice change. There were so many that I liked. School is made a bit more tolerable when you have something to laugh about. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
1/3/2004 c1 cosmo-queen
Great poem. Beautifully written so that each line is captivating. The magic classroom sounds like the ideal place to learn, and above all, it would be fun. Great work :)
*cosmo-queen*
Great poem. Beautifully written so that each line is captivating. The magic classroom sounds like the ideal place to learn, and above all, it would be fun. Great work :)
*cosmo-queen*
12/15/2003 c1 10White Rabbit4
Oh, I love it! It's so lovely and cheery and cute! Especially the last verse. *glomps the last verse* Such lovely internal rhyming...phwee!
Oh, I love it! It's so lovely and cheery and cute! Especially the last verse. *glomps the last verse* Such lovely internal rhyming...phwee!
12/7/2003 c1 82Linnet
Wow! I really loved this... especially the last stanza. "Laughter: the fixer, the mixer, the elixir."
Really wonderful
Agent A A A
Wow! I really loved this... especially the last stanza. "Laughter: the fixer, the mixer, the elixir."
Really wonderful
Agent A A A
11/22/2003 c1 Desert Wrath
I wish school was actually that easy and humorous...I liked this poem a lot! Write more!
-Desert Wrath
I wish school was actually that easy and humorous...I liked this poem a lot! Write more!
-Desert Wrath
11/22/2003 c2 kasurin
Hahah! The school jokes were pretty funny!
Hahah! The school jokes were pretty funny!
11/22/2003 c1 kasurin
... I want to be in a laughing classroom...=)
I really like the imagery here. It feels so warm and fun.Very magical.
... I want to be in a laughing classroom...=)
I really like the imagery here. It feels so warm and fun.Very magical.
11/18/2003 c1 tensai
oho. Nice!
oho. Nice!