for wilting to captivity5/28/2004 c1 
219S Noelle Long
I'm struggling to think of something to say besides "This was beautiful." Truthfully, like another reviewer said, this was one of the best poems I've read on FP.com.
-Runs off to read more of your work-
219S Noelle LongI'm struggling to think of something to say besides "This was beautiful." Truthfully, like another reviewer said, this was one of the best poems I've read on FP.com.
-Runs off to read more of your work-
4/9/2004 c1 51EternalTimexX
Wow, very well written. I love the way you use metaphors with the nature. It's overall amazing.
51EternalTimexXWow, very well written. I love the way you use metaphors with the nature. It's overall amazing.
12/7/2003 c1 acccountkiller
Hi...wow...this is awesome, truly, a great poem..one of the best ive read here...it really moves me..you should put a better summary..quoting the poem maybe, this si brilliant..on my favorites...amazing...Love, Mia
Hi...wow...this is awesome, truly, a great poem..one of the best ive read here...it really moves me..you should put a better summary..quoting the poem maybe, this si brilliant..on my favorites...amazing...Love, Mia
12/4/2003 c1 Aurora-Heart
wow...that was deep...and oddly enough i actually understood it...this was a really good poem...i loved it...keep up the good work!
wow...that was deep...and oddly enough i actually understood it...this was a really good poem...i loved it...keep up the good work!
11/23/2003 c1 18James Lagoski
This piece has an excellent rhyme scheme-
There were more than a few lines here I really liked-
Great Work-
Peace~
James
18James LagoskiThis piece has an excellent rhyme scheme-
There were more than a few lines here I really liked-
Great Work-
Peace~
James