for Cherish9/20/2004 c14 kamui-kun
Well, the final chapter once more. I always get sad when I finally end or catch up with a story... and now I find myself in that same situation with yours. I must say that I didn't expect this at all. I saw Lance as a respectful gentleman... but I never thought that he had that brave side in him, the side courageous enough to even consider stealing Cherish away from her parents. Now that's something!
And Cherish... oh my! I guess that sickness of hers has made her a very risky woman! =) Not even giving up a little struggle, and not even showing the slightest emotion of fear or concern about Lance's very surprising decision... that's pretty courageous of her.
Still, I don't agree with this elopement. Okay... forget Cherish's or Lance's parents for now. How about Cherish's education? How about her sickness? What will happen to Lance's job? What about Chase? I don't think he would agree with this as well... but I may be wrong. Anyway... I hope we do see what happens next.
Ya know, I think that this story could really go somewhere. You've set up the conflict well with this final chapter of yours and it could also take some pretty amazing turns. I do hope that you continue with this. Maybe a little more detail and all at some parts, but I think it's nice the way it is. Keep it up! =)
Well, the final chapter once more. I always get sad when I finally end or catch up with a story... and now I find myself in that same situation with yours. I must say that I didn't expect this at all. I saw Lance as a respectful gentleman... but I never thought that he had that brave side in him, the side courageous enough to even consider stealing Cherish away from her parents. Now that's something!
And Cherish... oh my! I guess that sickness of hers has made her a very risky woman! =) Not even giving up a little struggle, and not even showing the slightest emotion of fear or concern about Lance's very surprising decision... that's pretty courageous of her.
Still, I don't agree with this elopement. Okay... forget Cherish's or Lance's parents for now. How about Cherish's education? How about her sickness? What will happen to Lance's job? What about Chase? I don't think he would agree with this as well... but I may be wrong. Anyway... I hope we do see what happens next.
Ya know, I think that this story could really go somewhere. You've set up the conflict well with this final chapter of yours and it could also take some pretty amazing turns. I do hope that you continue with this. Maybe a little more detail and all at some parts, but I think it's nice the way it is. Keep it up! =)
9/17/2004 c13 kamui-kun
Oh... what's this? Lance's really pushing his luck eh? Well, good for him. That was a very sweet gift that he had bought Cherish. I know that money isn't everything... but it really does make some things a lot more easier. Spectacular description of the necklace, BTW. I guess every woman that had read this story is now thinking or dreaming of having something similar to that gift! =)
Oh well I guess she hadn't said much in that letter of hers. That's good. Leave out a few details but give just enough information to assure them that she's well. And I think that she's exactly right when she said they wouldn't be satisfied with a mere letter. It'll probably just push them to search harder. And when they find out that she's staying with Lance, oh I don't think it would be a peaceful reunion at all.
All in all, a good addition. Oh look, one more chapter and I would've caught up to everything. This is not good! Hope that Cherish's family won't go berserk when the find her. Keep it up!
Oh... what's this? Lance's really pushing his luck eh? Well, good for him. That was a very sweet gift that he had bought Cherish. I know that money isn't everything... but it really does make some things a lot more easier. Spectacular description of the necklace, BTW. I guess every woman that had read this story is now thinking or dreaming of having something similar to that gift! =)
Oh well I guess she hadn't said much in that letter of hers. That's good. Leave out a few details but give just enough information to assure them that she's well. And I think that she's exactly right when she said they wouldn't be satisfied with a mere letter. It'll probably just push them to search harder. And when they find out that she's staying with Lance, oh I don't think it would be a peaceful reunion at all.
All in all, a good addition. Oh look, one more chapter and I would've caught up to everything. This is not good! Hope that Cherish's family won't go berserk when the find her. Keep it up!
9/15/2004 c12 kamui-kun
Ah... so Cherish wasn't really hiding after all. Well that's something nice to hear. I guess saying something like "Hey mom! I'm all right. Just spending some quality minutes with Lance" wouldn't be the best thing to say now, would it? Oh well, at least she now sees how much trouble her "slight" disappearance has caused her family. Hm... I just wonder when she would reveal her sickness to them...
Aw, Chase's just the sweetest brother, ne? Leaving his work just to inform everyone of Cherish's letter was such a great thing to do. Oh I do wish he would finally figure out what's been bothering the poor woman, and I wish that he'd finally figure out where Cherish went. Hm... or maybe Cherish said where she was in that letter of hers... oh... that would be pretty interesting... =)
Great work, once more! Catch the next chapter soon!
Ah... so Cherish wasn't really hiding after all. Well that's something nice to hear. I guess saying something like "Hey mom! I'm all right. Just spending some quality minutes with Lance" wouldn't be the best thing to say now, would it? Oh well, at least she now sees how much trouble her "slight" disappearance has caused her family. Hm... I just wonder when she would reveal her sickness to them...
Aw, Chase's just the sweetest brother, ne? Leaving his work just to inform everyone of Cherish's letter was such a great thing to do. Oh I do wish he would finally figure out what's been bothering the poor woman, and I wish that he'd finally figure out where Cherish went. Hm... or maybe Cherish said where she was in that letter of hers... oh... that would be pretty interesting... =)
Great work, once more! Catch the next chapter soon!
9/11/2004 c11 kamui-kun
Aw, now isn't this a sweet scene. Ya know that I always love big brother scenes! I think that it's a rarity in these days and whoever has one should be blessed. Okay, back to the topic. Love your version of "Chase". Aside from Lance, I think that he's the other person that Cherish needs during these dark days. Lance's feelings for Cherish is needed, but I think she also needs Chase's brotherly love as well. Or at least some sort of family support...
Oh I'm not so sure that was the right move for Lance to do. Chase is practically his closest friend and I think he shouldn't worry him like that. Lying about Cherish's whereabouts to her brother... I'm not sure that that's smart of him. Oh well, it was after all for Cherish. She'll probably come forward when she wants to. Well, we'll see probably when the three meet in the future. Who knows? Maybe I'm wrong. :)
This sweet chapter is a nice addition! Chase's appearance was well timed. I was beginning to wonder what had happened to him. Anyway, I'll catch your next chapter soon!
Aw, now isn't this a sweet scene. Ya know that I always love big brother scenes! I think that it's a rarity in these days and whoever has one should be blessed. Okay, back to the topic. Love your version of "Chase". Aside from Lance, I think that he's the other person that Cherish needs during these dark days. Lance's feelings for Cherish is needed, but I think she also needs Chase's brotherly love as well. Or at least some sort of family support...
Oh I'm not so sure that was the right move for Lance to do. Chase is practically his closest friend and I think he shouldn't worry him like that. Lying about Cherish's whereabouts to her brother... I'm not sure that that's smart of him. Oh well, it was after all for Cherish. She'll probably come forward when she wants to. Well, we'll see probably when the three meet in the future. Who knows? Maybe I'm wrong. :)
This sweet chapter is a nice addition! Chase's appearance was well timed. I was beginning to wonder what had happened to him. Anyway, I'll catch your next chapter soon!
9/7/2004 c10 kamui-kun
Oh this is really a very heartbreaking and a heartwarming chapter. Finally, Cherish tells someone about her condition... and it's quite romantic to see that the first person that she told it to was Lance. I guess the guy's more important to her now than anyone of her friends or family members. How tragic and yet how sweet at the same time. Applause Applause for the perfect timing for this entry.
Ah... so that's why she didn't like to take any type of operation. This is kinda sad, and somewhat stupid on her part. I think she should consider having it cause life is practically more important than the use of her legs. Oh well, now that Lance is playing a much larger role in her life, maybe he'll be able to change her mind. I think that now she has more reasons for going under the knife, even if it would risk paralysis.
And what a terrific ending to such a tear jerking chapter. Lance is just so sweet, I do wish that they would get together without any problems affecting their lives. Lance is just so cool and so affectionate and so helpful, just the perfect man for someone with Cherish's condition. :)
Another well drafted chapter! I wish there was a bit more detail on the scenes and I wish the transitions between them were not too abrupt. But in any case, I do love this story and would read the next one soon! Great work!
Oh this is really a very heartbreaking and a heartwarming chapter. Finally, Cherish tells someone about her condition... and it's quite romantic to see that the first person that she told it to was Lance. I guess the guy's more important to her now than anyone of her friends or family members. How tragic and yet how sweet at the same time. Applause Applause for the perfect timing for this entry.
Ah... so that's why she didn't like to take any type of operation. This is kinda sad, and somewhat stupid on her part. I think she should consider having it cause life is practically more important than the use of her legs. Oh well, now that Lance is playing a much larger role in her life, maybe he'll be able to change her mind. I think that now she has more reasons for going under the knife, even if it would risk paralysis.
And what a terrific ending to such a tear jerking chapter. Lance is just so sweet, I do wish that they would get together without any problems affecting their lives. Lance is just so cool and so affectionate and so helpful, just the perfect man for someone with Cherish's condition. :)
Another well drafted chapter! I wish there was a bit more detail on the scenes and I wish the transitions between them were not too abrupt. But in any case, I do love this story and would read the next one soon! Great work!
9/5/2004 c9 kamui-kun
Oh... Lance is gonna keep Cherish company eh? I wonder what startling character developments we can witness through these next few chapters. Haha! Well, I guess they deserve it anyway. Those two are really so swee with each other but I'm so frustrated that they just could not seem to get the big breaks in their relationships. Oh well, I hope these new setting would provide us with something.
Damn! They were just inches away right there at the beginning! One good shove, maybe a good background music and who knows if it might have gone differently. Oh well, they have lots of time to spare... I think... :)
Oh how daring she was, that Cherish! *biggrin* Entering a man's room in her night clothes and only a blanket wrapped around her... hehehe... Ooh, Lance finally figures out that something's wrong with Cherish. Well, this was a startling turn of events. I thought that you would wait a few more chapters before you would make Cherish drop the bomb on Lance... but it seems that this is the moment. Wonder if Lance could do anything for the poor girl.
Great chapter! Very romantic and at the same time very concerning. I wonder if they'll ever find a way to heal Cherish's condition and if Lance would finally be accepted by Cherish's family before everything's too late. All in all, great work just as always.
Oh... Lance is gonna keep Cherish company eh? I wonder what startling character developments we can witness through these next few chapters. Haha! Well, I guess they deserve it anyway. Those two are really so swee with each other but I'm so frustrated that they just could not seem to get the big breaks in their relationships. Oh well, I hope these new setting would provide us with something.
Damn! They were just inches away right there at the beginning! One good shove, maybe a good background music and who knows if it might have gone differently. Oh well, they have lots of time to spare... I think... :)
Oh how daring she was, that Cherish! *biggrin* Entering a man's room in her night clothes and only a blanket wrapped around her... hehehe... Ooh, Lance finally figures out that something's wrong with Cherish. Well, this was a startling turn of events. I thought that you would wait a few more chapters before you would make Cherish drop the bomb on Lance... but it seems that this is the moment. Wonder if Lance could do anything for the poor girl.
Great chapter! Very romantic and at the same time very concerning. I wonder if they'll ever find a way to heal Cherish's condition and if Lance would finally be accepted by Cherish's family before everything's too late. All in all, great work just as always.
9/3/2004 c8 kamui-kun
Oh... a little bit of a blast from the past! I always love looking back in time. Ah... so that's what the whole secret was. It wasn't some past relationship nor was it a personal vow. It's something much worse. So what's the sickness? Some sort of brain tumor or cancer? Oh now this really does shake up your whole story a bit... and now I wonder how you're gonna insert that "gay" idea your planning. =)
But besides that, I'm wondering why she doesn't want to tell anyone of her condition. Hm... maybe that's just her character, an introvert. But this does spice things up... ah... new idea! Maybe the cancer she got came from the Nolan's factory's poisoning their environment... nah... Oh well, me and my wild imaginations once more. I do hope that she resolves everything before it's too late!
Great job once more! Now there's also a time limit that Lance and Cherish must keep in mind. Nice work!
Oh... a little bit of a blast from the past! I always love looking back in time. Ah... so that's what the whole secret was. It wasn't some past relationship nor was it a personal vow. It's something much worse. So what's the sickness? Some sort of brain tumor or cancer? Oh now this really does shake up your whole story a bit... and now I wonder how you're gonna insert that "gay" idea your planning. =)
But besides that, I'm wondering why she doesn't want to tell anyone of her condition. Hm... maybe that's just her character, an introvert. But this does spice things up... ah... new idea! Maybe the cancer she got came from the Nolan's factory's poisoning their environment... nah... Oh well, me and my wild imaginations once more. I do hope that she resolves everything before it's too late!
Great job once more! Now there's also a time limit that Lance and Cherish must keep in mind. Nice work!
9/1/2004 c7 kamui-kun
Oh... and as if the tension couldn't go any higher from the last chapter, you successfully increased it with this one. Oh this was really really good! A perfect follow up chapter to the last one. You really left us hanging on the edge last chapter. Good thing that this one was here to add a little more drama, and to further deepen the romance plot brewing between Cherish and Lance.
Okay, Cherish has really been confusing me. First of all, she seems to be head over heals for this Lance fella and yet she does everything possible just to avoid the guy. She really must have a good reason to be avoiding him. Hm... and why doesn't Chase seem to be aware of it? He seems pretty close to Cherish, and yet even he is in the dark. Hm... interesting. But I do hope that more things would happen between the two lovebirds. =)
And you really have some very deep vocabulary there, my friend. I envy you. Anyway, I think there was a little typo error somewhere... just couldn't find it now. Nothing too big, though. All in all, terrific chapter. Keep it up! =)
Oh... and as if the tension couldn't go any higher from the last chapter, you successfully increased it with this one. Oh this was really really good! A perfect follow up chapter to the last one. You really left us hanging on the edge last chapter. Good thing that this one was here to add a little more drama, and to further deepen the romance plot brewing between Cherish and Lance.
Okay, Cherish has really been confusing me. First of all, she seems to be head over heals for this Lance fella and yet she does everything possible just to avoid the guy. She really must have a good reason to be avoiding him. Hm... and why doesn't Chase seem to be aware of it? He seems pretty close to Cherish, and yet even he is in the dark. Hm... interesting. But I do hope that more things would happen between the two lovebirds. =)
And you really have some very deep vocabulary there, my friend. I envy you. Anyway, I think there was a little typo error somewhere... just couldn't find it now. Nothing too big, though. All in all, terrific chapter. Keep it up! =)
8/30/2004 c6 kamui-kun
Well it seems like the dinner went pretty well. At least they were able to finish the whole meal in one piece. And Lance does seem to be a nice fella, trying to help out with the household chores while the rest were already relaxing and taking a break. It's just so bad that his family name had to be "Nolan". I could imagine things being much better for the young boy if it weren't.
Oh, love the little glitter of romance between Cherish and Lance. Ha, that part with the hand grabbing and not letting go as well as the locking of gazes was just pure sweet! If only Cherish's mother hadn't interrupted. Stupid! But now we see that even though he seems to be a nice boy, reputation means a lot. Kinda like the forbidden love between Romeo and Juliet in some ways, eh?
Oh well, I guess they'll have to find romance at another time... and somewhere far away from their family's closemindedness. Whoo! There seems to be a lot of work yet to be done before any form of relationship could be formed between the leads. Great chapter! I'll try to read more soon!
Well it seems like the dinner went pretty well. At least they were able to finish the whole meal in one piece. And Lance does seem to be a nice fella, trying to help out with the household chores while the rest were already relaxing and taking a break. It's just so bad that his family name had to be "Nolan". I could imagine things being much better for the young boy if it weren't.
Oh, love the little glitter of romance between Cherish and Lance. Ha, that part with the hand grabbing and not letting go as well as the locking of gazes was just pure sweet! If only Cherish's mother hadn't interrupted. Stupid! But now we see that even though he seems to be a nice boy, reputation means a lot. Kinda like the forbidden love between Romeo and Juliet in some ways, eh?
Oh well, I guess they'll have to find romance at another time... and somewhere far away from their family's closemindedness. Whoo! There seems to be a lot of work yet to be done before any form of relationship could be formed between the leads. Great chapter! I'll try to read more soon!
8/26/2004 c5 kamui-kun
Ah... now that calmed my theories... hahaha... there was nothing between Chase and Lance after all! =) Hahaha! Me and my stupid and wild imagination. Well, it's good to know that Lance and Chase are manly men... and it's quite cute to see Lance all gooey and gusy over Cherish. He really does like her, doesn't he? And she likes him in return, doesn't she? Well then problem solved! All that they have to do is to get through that terrible reputation the Nolans have made for themselves and everything would be clean and dandy.
Oh, that's so admirable of Chase to invite Lance over to dinner! He's a true friend, looking past that name to see the true man that Lance really was. Plus, this poses a lot of possible and interesting developments in the plot. How would their family react to the man? How would Cherish react to him? Which side would Cherish and Chase take when conflict arises? Interesting...
Great chapter, once more. Thanks as well for pointing out that stupid mistake in my story. =) I'll catch the next chapter pretty soon! See ya!
Ah... now that calmed my theories... hahaha... there was nothing between Chase and Lance after all! =) Hahaha! Me and my stupid and wild imagination. Well, it's good to know that Lance and Chase are manly men... and it's quite cute to see Lance all gooey and gusy over Cherish. He really does like her, doesn't he? And she likes him in return, doesn't she? Well then problem solved! All that they have to do is to get through that terrible reputation the Nolans have made for themselves and everything would be clean and dandy.
Oh, that's so admirable of Chase to invite Lance over to dinner! He's a true friend, looking past that name to see the true man that Lance really was. Plus, this poses a lot of possible and interesting developments in the plot. How would their family react to the man? How would Cherish react to him? Which side would Cherish and Chase take when conflict arises? Interesting...
Great chapter, once more. Thanks as well for pointing out that stupid mistake in my story. =) I'll catch the next chapter pretty soon! See ya!
8/23/2004 c4 kamui-kun
Oh such a sweet chapter! Yeah, I love it when people hide their true feelings, especially when the person that you feel for is staring right at her face. Cherish is such a sweet girl, so clumsy and so overprotective when Lance is around. The way that she stumbled down really summarizes how awkward and nervous she felt whenever Lance was around. And it's quite good to see that something seems to be forming within her regarding this close friend.
But... I dunno... I feel something very wrong with this... something that involves Lance and Chase. Ha! I dunno if I'm just being influenced by my sister's fantasy stories... but somehow... don't laugh when I say this... I feel that Lance and Chase's relationship is far more than mere friends. =) I mean, coming in the middle of the night, secret meetings, haha! Maybe it's just my stupid distorted imagination.
Anyway, I think this is still an interesting story. Very good, very romantic. Gets the job done. Now all that we need to know is the relationship between the two lead males. Haha... I feel something brewing... See ya!
Oh such a sweet chapter! Yeah, I love it when people hide their true feelings, especially when the person that you feel for is staring right at her face. Cherish is such a sweet girl, so clumsy and so overprotective when Lance is around. The way that she stumbled down really summarizes how awkward and nervous she felt whenever Lance was around. And it's quite good to see that something seems to be forming within her regarding this close friend.
But... I dunno... I feel something very wrong with this... something that involves Lance and Chase. Ha! I dunno if I'm just being influenced by my sister's fantasy stories... but somehow... don't laugh when I say this... I feel that Lance and Chase's relationship is far more than mere friends. =) I mean, coming in the middle of the night, secret meetings, haha! Maybe it's just my stupid distorted imagination.
Anyway, I think this is still an interesting story. Very good, very romantic. Gets the job done. Now all that we need to know is the relationship between the two lead males. Haha... I feel something brewing... See ya!
8/17/2004 c3 kamui-kun
Okay, this is really getting very weird. I swear that I reviewed this chapter before but it says here that there's no review from me at all. Hm... strange... where did it go? Did I review in my dream or something? Or maybe it was because of that downtime error FP experienced a few days back.
Anyway, here's what I remembered anyway from my last review. First of all, I read a lot of new names popping out. I dunno if they're just minor characters and all; nevertheless, I'll be keeping an eye out for them. I think this chapter would be better as a beginning to the next since (in my opinion) nothing much happened except for Cherish being left alone by her parents and her brother. That way, it would seem a bit more fulfilling.
Anyways, I'm still wondering what Lance had to say to Chase on the previous chapter. From what things sound like, it seems pretty important. And if it's a Nolan, important discussions are really what they are. Hm... could it have something to do with Cherish? We'll see, I guess.
So I'm now off to read your next chapter. Expect me to submit a review tomorrow. For now, see ya!
Okay, this is really getting very weird. I swear that I reviewed this chapter before but it says here that there's no review from me at all. Hm... strange... where did it go? Did I review in my dream or something? Or maybe it was because of that downtime error FP experienced a few days back.
Anyway, here's what I remembered anyway from my last review. First of all, I read a lot of new names popping out. I dunno if they're just minor characters and all; nevertheless, I'll be keeping an eye out for them. I think this chapter would be better as a beginning to the next since (in my opinion) nothing much happened except for Cherish being left alone by her parents and her brother. That way, it would seem a bit more fulfilling.
Anyways, I'm still wondering what Lance had to say to Chase on the previous chapter. From what things sound like, it seems pretty important. And if it's a Nolan, important discussions are really what they are. Hm... could it have something to do with Cherish? We'll see, I guess.
So I'm now off to read your next chapter. Expect me to submit a review tomorrow. For now, see ya!
8/12/2004 c2 kamui-kun
Hm... so the Nolan's are not that well taken in their town after all. Polluting and poisoning the environment like what they are doing... that won't give a good name to you at all. But I've got this feeling that Lance is not the type that would do such a thing. Maybe when he becomes in charge things will change.
Ahh... I just love sweet and tight families. Rarely do I see a few of these nowadays from the multitude of books that I've read. There's always something wrong with them, either one parent is missing or one is an ass or one brother is some criminal. My point is, it's good to see a normal one now and then.
Hm... semi-cliffhanger ending. Nice hook right there! You cutted the end when everything was just beginning to sound pretty jucy between Lance and Chase. Somehow, I have this odd feeling that I wouldn't like it one bit... and I think it has something to do with Cherish. We'll see what Lance's up to.
I think it's pretty good. I dunno why you're asking me to be ready to be disappointed. The world's kinda bland for be but I guess that's because I'm so accustomed to fantasy genre instead of something purely romance. Anyway, I'll check the others soon! BTW I added you on my Yahoo Messanger account! Hope to hear from you soon! =)
Hm... so the Nolan's are not that well taken in their town after all. Polluting and poisoning the environment like what they are doing... that won't give a good name to you at all. But I've got this feeling that Lance is not the type that would do such a thing. Maybe when he becomes in charge things will change.
Ahh... I just love sweet and tight families. Rarely do I see a few of these nowadays from the multitude of books that I've read. There's always something wrong with them, either one parent is missing or one is an ass or one brother is some criminal. My point is, it's good to see a normal one now and then.
Hm... semi-cliffhanger ending. Nice hook right there! You cutted the end when everything was just beginning to sound pretty jucy between Lance and Chase. Somehow, I have this odd feeling that I wouldn't like it one bit... and I think it has something to do with Cherish. We'll see what Lance's up to.
I think it's pretty good. I dunno why you're asking me to be ready to be disappointed. The world's kinda bland for be but I guess that's because I'm so accustomed to fantasy genre instead of something purely romance. Anyway, I'll check the others soon! BTW I added you on my Yahoo Messanger account! Hope to hear from you soon! =)
8/8/2004 c1 kamui-kun
Hey! I thought that I read all your fictionpress stories but it seems as if I've missed out on this little one. Well here I am! Romance, eh? Hm... this is actually not my cup of tea but I do enjoy a good change now and then. So here we go!
First of all, this is really a very appropriate beginning! I love the intricate descriptions that you used to describe Cherish, Chase (whohoo! I love that name), and Lance. Makes it really easy to visualize all of them and at the same time makes them seem much more real than they really are. =)
Ah... and just as early as now I'm smelling something between Lance and Cherish. I dunno. When I read of two persons that seemingly hate one another I frequently find them ending up together in the end. Well, I dunno if these two are the main couple in your story but I'm keeping an eye out for them starting now.
Nice beginning! I'll try to read more soon! BTW, do you use yahoo messanger? Just a question. =)
Hey! I thought that I read all your fictionpress stories but it seems as if I've missed out on this little one. Well here I am! Romance, eh? Hm... this is actually not my cup of tea but I do enjoy a good change now and then. So here we go!
First of all, this is really a very appropriate beginning! I love the intricate descriptions that you used to describe Cherish, Chase (whohoo! I love that name), and Lance. Makes it really easy to visualize all of them and at the same time makes them seem much more real than they really are. =)
Ah... and just as early as now I'm smelling something between Lance and Cherish. I dunno. When I read of two persons that seemingly hate one another I frequently find them ending up together in the end. Well, I dunno if these two are the main couple in your story but I'm keeping an eye out for them starting now.
Nice beginning! I'll try to read more soon! BTW, do you use yahoo messanger? Just a question. =)
2/11/2004 c6 pippin tomson
I really liked the attitude and the tension drawn by your words. They seemed to have made a picture, and the relationships envolved within it, very clear. I am really enjoying this and I'm deffinatly reading more.
pippin
I really liked the attitude and the tension drawn by your words. They seemed to have made a picture, and the relationships envolved within it, very clear. I am really enjoying this and I'm deffinatly reading more.
pippin