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6/1/2004 c1 4El Smurfo
...*speechless, too good*...
4/30/2004 c1 9Veggiegirl101
That has to be one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read in my life! I really feel inspired right about now and kinda teary eyed...that hit home. Good job and keep up the good work!
11/30/2003 c1 2RuneBladerX327
Hiyas! (It's Setokaiba419!) I never got time to read your fiction story, but I promise I tell later on, after I finish the Journal report on John Davison Rockefeller... Anyway...
This poem is so inspiring! It's very vividly imagined of truth, and of what the world is now a days. The lines of the Stanza's are of purely written of heart, a heart of a person who's been through injuticeness, and cruelity of this world. To become someone different because of the world, and to find your answer only within your heart, now that's true! Hope you continue writing poems, and stories...Are you positively sure you aren't a famous author in disguise? You should really get an agent, and WOW! You've become a best-seller. Maybe you start small by poetry, and then novels or novellas. Hope to read more! and Never loose faith or pride! Cyas around ...(got to get back to work...)
11/26/2003 c1 1romanticvomitx
wow. all i can say is wow. beutefull. althou i dont belive in god, marvales. whisper you dont know what the fuck your talking about. bitch. get a life. you cant see real talent. go fuck youre self you crack whore.
11/24/2003 c1 3careless whisper
Cry me a river, far too long and whiny.
11/22/2003 c1 Forsythe Adams
I congratulate you with this magnificent piece of work of the mind. The content is so true. many people nowadays feel down in misery and woe and only God can heal this disease of the soul. I also add of the great structure of the poem and the use of Archaic-anglo type of terminologies. I encourage you to write more and i'll be waiting for it.=) Mabuhay!

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