for Emotions2/3/2004 c1 The Unexplainable
I don't know if this would help. But the psychic ability that allows a person to sense others feelings in called Empathy...just thought perhaps that might help you. Telepathy is reading and munipulating others thoughts.
I don't know if this would help. But the psychic ability that allows a person to sense others feelings in called Empathy...just thought perhaps that might help you. Telepathy is reading and munipulating others thoughts.
11/23/2003 c1 
7dragon of the wind
Inferesting...very interesting...i like it! you should add to it though, i want to know what happens next.
7dragon of the windInferesting...very interesting...i like it! you should add to it though, i want to know what happens next.
11/21/2003 c1 AlienVision
yeah...im sorry for my really weird review yesterday...yeah, i get really hyper sometimes, u know? ok, u dont but hey...this story is pretty good! have u ever tried writing humourous short stories? thats what i do...if u have time, check out my profile..and read "an idiot's thoughts", the idiot being me!
this s.s aka short story, was pretty sad, and had a kinda mellow mood to it. (i have no clue what mellow means, but it seems to sound rite here) and its kinda strange...mayB u can add more detail on her special powers, and on why she feels so strongly on goin to church and everythin...
if u dont like constructive criticism, then just ignore what i just wrote... some poeple take offense. all in all, great s.s! write more! and i'll review...
yeah...im sorry for my really weird review yesterday...yeah, i get really hyper sometimes, u know? ok, u dont but hey...this story is pretty good! have u ever tried writing humourous short stories? thats what i do...if u have time, check out my profile..and read "an idiot's thoughts", the idiot being me!
this s.s aka short story, was pretty sad, and had a kinda mellow mood to it. (i have no clue what mellow means, but it seems to sound rite here) and its kinda strange...mayB u can add more detail on her special powers, and on why she feels so strongly on goin to church and everythin...
if u dont like constructive criticism, then just ignore what i just wrote... some poeple take offense. all in all, great s.s! write more! and i'll review...
11/21/2003 c1 30Three Cornered Hat
Yay! Another story, albeit a short one. Did the main character kill Mrs. Herral? There were a couple of spots where you used periods instead of commas, like: "Outside I hear.no feel the people" and "but for my.ahem.special abilities" Also, "dress are wave lightly..." Thats about it, along w/a couple of other little typo's, but me likey the story. Yes, I be throwed gramer 'n' spelin' out from window their. Anyway, keep it up, I like these little short stories.
30Three Cornered HatYay! Another story, albeit a short one. Did the main character kill Mrs. Herral? There were a couple of spots where you used periods instead of commas, like: "Outside I hear.no feel the people" and "but for my.ahem.special abilities" Also, "dress are wave lightly..." Thats about it, along w/a couple of other little typo's, but me likey the story. Yes, I be throwed gramer 'n' spelin' out from window their. Anyway, keep it up, I like these little short stories.