for Bleeding Mists5/14/2004 c2 
5umbrius
Joe: Wow. . .
Kyr: Wow. . .
Both: I like it.
Kyr: Ew, i sed somting nise, lok at hou it skroos wif mee.
Joe: HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA . . .
5umbriusJoe: Wow. . .
Kyr: Wow. . .
Both: I like it.
Kyr: Ew, i sed somting nise, lok at hou it skroos wif mee.
Joe: HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA . . .
5/14/2004 c1 umbrius
Joe: M. . .blood. . .
Kyr: See? I am not the only disgusting personality.
Joe: Blood is not disgusting.
Kyr: (face palms) Of all the people in the world, I had to be given to Joey, GAH!
Joe: M. . .blood. . .
Kyr: See? I am not the only disgusting personality.
Joe: Blood is not disgusting.
Kyr: (face palms) Of all the people in the world, I had to be given to Joey, GAH!
5/5/2004 c2 5Zorya Utrenyaya
Yay you updated! Sorry I haven't been by for so long - I haven't had enough internet time - gr! Am I the person who asked you to carry on and then didn't come back? Ah! Apologies! I'll come back as soon as you get a new chapter up - I wanna see some action in this story!
5Zorya UtrenyayaYay you updated! Sorry I haven't been by for so long - I haven't had enough internet time - gr! Am I the person who asked you to carry on and then didn't come back? Ah! Apologies! I'll come back as soon as you get a new chapter up - I wanna see some action in this story!
3/25/2004 c2 13LordUltima
It snowed here... and as I promised, I did write another chapter to this... now if only the person that asked me to continue it would come back to look at the new addition.
13LordUltimaIt snowed here... and as I promised, I did write another chapter to this... now if only the person that asked me to continue it would come back to look at the new addition.
3/17/2004 c2 1Mitsozuka Ayarashi
gag me on a harpoon, even... who is this guy, and why does he speak as though he were a Shakespearean Tragedian? What this guy needs is a Plasma Rifle, a Shotgun, and a few million hapless baddies to massacre to keep him from being such a wuss. It has snowed in hell before, and it will happen again.
1Mitsozuka Ayarashigag me on a harpoon, even... who is this guy, and why does he speak as though he were a Shakespearean Tragedian? What this guy needs is a Plasma Rifle, a Shotgun, and a few million hapless baddies to massacre to keep him from being such a wuss. It has snowed in hell before, and it will happen again.
2/27/2004 c1 dD The dark One
JOE: I like it. I hope to see it continued...
KYR: This is bile, and nothing but...although, it has a certain quality to it...
JOE: I like it. I hope to see it continued...
KYR: This is bile, and nothing but...although, it has a certain quality to it...
2/4/2004 c1 5Zorya Utrenyaya
Cool idea ... it looks like it could turn into something good.
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A couple of nitpicks - you say the "windows were frosted in red" shouldn't it be "frosted with red"?
-you've spelt sea as see
- and minuet instead of minute
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Sorry about that, they're just little things that will make your story a lot better if you carry it on. I really want to know what the character did! I await your sequel ...
5Zorya UtrenyayaCool idea ... it looks like it could turn into something good.
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A couple of nitpicks - you say the "windows were frosted in red" shouldn't it be "frosted with red"?
-you've spelt sea as see
- and minuet instead of minute
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Sorry about that, they're just little things that will make your story a lot better if you carry it on. I really want to know what the character did! I await your sequel ...
11/24/2003 c1 1Mitsozuka Ayarashi
Not bad... Keep going with this, and it will be interesting. Good job so far, keep it up.
1Mitsozuka AyarashiNot bad... Keep going with this, and it will be interesting. Good job so far, keep it up.