for The First Mage12/7/2003 c6 
18Alcapacien
Lol, poor spoked horse. So Gala does have magic! She can speak to animals. That is sweet! Can't wait for more
18AlcapacienLol, poor spoked horse. So Gala does have magic! She can speak to animals. That is sweet! Can't wait for more
12/6/2003 c6 1Coeur de Milan
I love Tuck! I love Gala, I love Kavador. All of your characters are so lively and interesting, and your storyline is unique. Can you write more from Zaike's perspective? She's too mysterious. Keep updating, please!
1Coeur de MilanI love Tuck! I love Gala, I love Kavador. All of your characters are so lively and interesting, and your storyline is unique. Can you write more from Zaike's perspective? She's too mysterious. Keep updating, please!
12/1/2003 c6 2Vista
Wow, Rothwyn, you update so fast!
Anyway, those were two great chapters, I loved the little bird~ probably because I like every fluffy little bird... Keep writing!
2VistaWow, Rothwyn, you update so fast!
Anyway, those were two great chapters, I loved the little bird~ probably because I like every fluffy little bird... Keep writing!
12/1/2003 c5 18Alcapacien
THAT IS GREAT! I love the whole story so far! I hope Gala and Narad get together! Zaike or whatever is annoying me...kind of like a cheerleader if you ask me
18AlcapacienTHAT IS GREAT! I love the whole story so far! I hope Gala and Narad get together! Zaike or whatever is annoying me...kind of like a cheerleader if you ask me
11/27/2003 c4 2Vista
OOh, a beautiful mage complicates things! I've decided that Gala is my new favourite character (but Kavador is still close to #1)
I love the way you express Gala's attitude to Zaike in her comments.
And it all looks so much better now in nice, spaced out paragraph, don't you think?
2VistaOOh, a beautiful mage complicates things! I've decided that Gala is my new favourite character (but Kavador is still close to #1)
I love the way you express Gala's attitude to Zaike in her comments.
And it all looks so much better now in nice, spaced out paragraph, don't you think?
11/24/2003 c3 Vista
Wow, reading the last chapter gave me a sense of the Salem witch trials, you know, the way the people were persecuted. I really like Kavador! Fave horse of the fic! Ok now a tip: Try to save your file as web documents! It's so much easier to read when every speaker has a new line, and it's not all mushed into one big paragraph!
Well, until later~
Vista
Wow, reading the last chapter gave me a sense of the Salem witch trials, you know, the way the people were persecuted. I really like Kavador! Fave horse of the fic! Ok now a tip: Try to save your file as web documents! It's so much easier to read when every speaker has a new line, and it's not all mushed into one big paragraph!
Well, until later~
Vista
11/21/2003 c1 1Chuuru Adono
Wow, this is already amazing me. Your story is the first I've read here at fp.com, and I have to say it's already blown me away! Your desciptions make the story interesting to read, yet sometimes my brain wants to explode after a while... XP Well, I hope to see an update! And I like the Gala/ Narad thing already... ,
-Sailor Hannah {P.S. I would really enjoy it if you read my first original fic, I think you would find it slightly enjoyable! ^.^ I hope that didn't sound conceited, I just wanted a lil' pushalong, you know? Bye!}
1Chuuru AdonoWow, this is already amazing me. Your story is the first I've read here at fp.com, and I have to say it's already blown me away! Your desciptions make the story interesting to read, yet sometimes my brain wants to explode after a while... XP Well, I hope to see an update! And I like the Gala/ Narad thing already... ,
-Sailor Hannah {P.S. I would really enjoy it if you read my first original fic, I think you would find it slightly enjoyable! ^.^ I hope that didn't sound conceited, I just wanted a lil' pushalong, you know? Bye!}