for After Death7/24/2004 c1 Delete Name
It had no set scheming, but it was good anyway! You should really trying rhyming. ^.^
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8/10
It had no set scheming, but it was good anyway! You should really trying rhyming. ^.^
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8/10
1/23/2004 c1 
3Tenika D
Not bad . . . not bad at all. ^^ I like it quite a lot. *claps* The imagery was most excellent - well done!
Tenika Dargan
BTW, many thanks for reviewing my piece - I really appreciate it. ^^
3Tenika DNot bad . . . not bad at all. ^^ I like it quite a lot. *claps* The imagery was most excellent - well done!
Tenika Dargan
BTW, many thanks for reviewing my piece - I really appreciate it. ^^
1/17/2004 c1 60QueenRemge13
Pretty cool poem. :-) Thanks for the review, I always like hearing from people!
QR
60QueenRemge13Pretty cool poem. :-) Thanks for the review, I always like hearing from people!
QR
1/3/2004 c1 8rufflesia
I kinda pity the person in the story. Being forgotten will hurt the feelings of the person greatly. Great rhyming and matching too. :)
8rufflesiaI kinda pity the person in the story. Being forgotten will hurt the feelings of the person greatly. Great rhyming and matching too. :)
12/25/2003 c1 16amethystdawn
Interesting poem you got here. ^_^ I like your style of writing, it's really good. Keep up the good work!
P.S Thanks for putting me on your favorite authors list! ^_^ I feel flattered.
16amethystdawnInteresting poem you got here. ^_^ I like your style of writing, it's really good. Keep up the good work!
P.S Thanks for putting me on your favorite authors list! ^_^ I feel flattered.
12/18/2003 c1 Grey-eyed-dream-chaser
I like this one, even though I'm not ready to die yet. I like the way this was portrayed.
I like this one, even though I'm not ready to die yet. I like the way this was portrayed.
12/2/2003 c1 4spicey ice
i think this is an excellent poem, so calm and relaxed. i like it lot. :)
add you to my favourites authors list!
4spicey icei think this is an excellent poem, so calm and relaxed. i like it lot. :)
add you to my favourites authors list!
11/25/2003 c1 82pippin tomson
This seems like a scene, and a very sad one at that. This seems well thought about and caring and I really like the way that thought has gone into it. Itm makes a lot of difference and makes the poem so much better. I have not been disappointed (did I spell that right?) by anything that I've read of yours. The work is extremly well thought! WEll done, fantastic, beautiful work!
p.s. The word you got confused with was supposed to be "is", but I didn't see it when I read it through, I can't spell, as you'd have guessed!
82pippin tomsonThis seems like a scene, and a very sad one at that. This seems well thought about and caring and I really like the way that thought has gone into it. Itm makes a lot of difference and makes the poem so much better. I have not been disappointed (did I spell that right?) by anything that I've read of yours. The work is extremly well thought! WEll done, fantastic, beautiful work!
p.s. The word you got confused with was supposed to be "is", but I didn't see it when I read it through, I can't spell, as you'd have guessed!
11/23/2003 c1 36Psycho-kyugurl
A sweet and moderate piece where it really makes me feel rather sleepy...haven't been sleeping good this few days and I don't seem to have the inspiration to write poems nowadays. This is an inspiring piece and you know what? You can be so poetic at times^^
36Psycho-kyugurlA sweet and moderate piece where it really makes me feel rather sleepy...haven't been sleeping good this few days and I don't seem to have the inspiration to write poems nowadays. This is an inspiring piece and you know what? You can be so poetic at times^^
11/23/2003 c1 desolation and destiny
So sad! *sniff*
Your stories are beautifull, and I love them...
But your poetry is TRULY outstanding!
You made me cry just now!
So sad! *sniff*
Your stories are beautifull, and I love them...
But your poetry is TRULY outstanding!
You made me cry just now!
11/22/2003 c1 148JJR Meerraf
I loved the ending! You repeated many words and frazes also which was just brilliant! It only captured and enlarged the drama of the poem. Genious! Keep writing!
P.S.
thanks for all the reviews! You can use my poem if you like, as long as I'm achknowledged as the author.
P.S.S.
If it's not too much to ask, could I have a copy of the buliten?
Great writing! Excellent! Keep it up!
148JJR MeerrafI loved the ending! You repeated many words and frazes also which was just brilliant! It only captured and enlarged the drama of the poem. Genious! Keep writing!
P.S.
thanks for all the reviews! You can use my poem if you like, as long as I'm achknowledged as the author.
P.S.S.
If it's not too much to ask, could I have a copy of the buliten?
Great writing! Excellent! Keep it up!