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11/22/2003 c1 AVIGON
I think this is one of those poems that seems more powerful when you're involved, when you're actually living the poem. I think it's probably a very strong and emotional poem both to you and the person it's directed at, but for the reader that doesn't know the situation, it seems a bit "bleak". I don't know. It's a nice enough poem, but maybe I would like it better if it had a different imagery, or a riskier wording or something...

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