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12/22/2003 c1 Butterfly Radcliffe
That was beautiful, I love the last line!
~God Bless
11/23/2003 c1 Morph
Now this one is just plain fucking stupid. lol just kidden, its a very good poem
11/22/2003 c1 Matt
I appreciate the use of detail as it draws the reader into the narrator's emotional state. Love is confusing and the apparent lack of absolution only heightens that point to a very palatable degree. I do wonder if this was taken from life because it does seem very real and very heartfelt. This girl has potential...one only hopes that she can see through anyone who would try to use this honest idealistic view of a befuddling subject to ingratiate themselves with her for purposes veiled in a thick layer of diffusion.
11/22/2003 c1 7not done baking
Wow! That was sad and truthful! Which one were you working on in French the other day?

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